Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct and concise, which is good, but it's too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, add a brief topic sentence confirming you had a bike and then one or two specific details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory). Use a linking word to connect the sentences. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and natural language.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I rode it almost every afternoon after school. It helped me feel independent and is one of my fondest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Your response contradicts itself: you say bikes are not popular but then describe seeing many bikers. To improve, make your position clear and provide specific, coherent reasons with linking words. For example, state whether they are popular overall or only in certain areas or times, mention evidence, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Avoid long, awkward clauses and use simpler, accurate phrasing.

Ví dụ: I think bikes are popular in some areas, especially among fitness enthusiasts. For instance, I often see large groups of cyclists on the streets in the mornings, but in many neighborhoods people mainly use cars, so overall cycling is not widespread.

× I don't think that bikes are popular in our country because every morning that I go outside to take a walk, I would always see a large group of bikers pass through the streets.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because every morning when I go outside for a walk, I always see large groups of bikers passing through the streets.

Pronoun: 'our country' is inconsistent with the student's perspective; 'my country' is more natural when speaking about personal experience. Time clause: 'every morning that I go outside to take a walk' is wordy and slightly ungrammatical; use 'every morning when I go outside for a walk'. Modal/tense: 'I would always see' is incorrect here because it suggests habitual past conditional; use simple present 'I always see' for habitual actions. Verb form: 'a large group of bikers pass' should be 'large groups of bikers passing' or 'a large group of bikers passes' for subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing; chosen correction uses plural 'groups' with 'passing' for smoothness. Suggestions: use 'my' instead of 'our' for personal statements, use 'when' for habitual time clauses, use simple present for habitual actions, and match subject and verb (or use participle 'passing') for natural phrasing.