Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 質問をそのまま繰り返すのは避け、直接的に答えてから必要なら理由や詳細を加える練習をしてください。具体的には、肯定・否定の応答(topic sentence)を最初に述べ、その後に年齢、どんなタイプの自転車だったか、どれくらいの頻度で乗ったかなどの具体例を一つか二つ付け加えると良いです。また回答は自然で無駄のない5文以内に収めてください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I started riding it when I was six. I used to ride around my neighborhood almost every afternoon with my friends. Because of that, I became quite confident cycling on my own by the age of eight.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 質問をそのまま繰り返すのではなく、まず自分の考え(肯定・否定・部分的に)を述べ、次に理由や具体的な例を付け加えてください。例えば都市部での通勤用やレジャー用での利用の違い、政府の自転車政策やインフラの状況などを挙げると内容が具体的になります。接続詞(however, because, for example)を使って論理的に繋げることも練習しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bike lanes are available. However, in rural areas cars are still preferred due to longer distances and fewer bike paths.
× Did you have a bike when you were a child?
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
この回答は元の受験生の応答が質問の繰り返しになっており、実際の意味ある返答(肯定や否定+詳細)を欠いているため文構造上の問題がある。質問は過去の事実を尋ねているので、過去形の肯定文(主語+過去形動詞)で答える必要がある。改善提案:質問に対して肯定なら 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'、否定なら 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' のように過去形を用いて答える。また詳細を付け加えると自然になる(例: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school.')。
× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.
この応答も質問を単に繰り返しており、意味のある返答になっていないため文構造上の問題がある。質問は現在の意見を尋ねているので、'I think' を主部にして現在形で述べるのが自然である。改善提案:肯定なら 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'、否定なら 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.' と答え、理由を続けることでより良い応答になる(例: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.')。