Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition, give a clear direct topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Remove redundant phrase "I didn't have a bike" then immediately repeat similar idea. Use a linking word if adding detail. Keep to 1–3 sentences max.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't own a bike as a child; instead, I had a small bicycle that I loved to ride around my neighborhood. For example, I used to cycle to my friend’s house every afternoon, which helped me learn balance and confidence.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent by removing fillers (uh), use one clear reason with a linking word, and give a concrete example or short statistic. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid overlong phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and help people avoid traffic. For instance, many commuters use motorbikes during rush hours, especially between 9–10 AM and 5–6 PM, because they can weave through congested streets.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I when I was a child. Rather, I had a bicycle which I was fond of riding a lot.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Rather, I had a bicycle that I was fond of riding a lot.

The sentence contains a repetition 'when I when I' and uses 'which' in a restrictive relative clause describing 'bicycle'; in spoken English 'that' is more natural for restrictive clauses. Also maintain simple past tense consistently. Suggest removing the duplicated phrase and replacing 'which' with 'that' for clarity: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Rather, I had a bicycle that I was fond of riding a lot.'

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country as uh bikes are considered to be one of the most, uh easiest and fastest way to travel from one place to another because uh, during the duty hours, especially uh, from 9:00 to 10:00 in the morning uh, 5:00 to 6:00 PM.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are considered one of the easiest and fastest ways to travel from one place to another, especially during rush hours, for example from 9:00 to 10:00 in the morning and from 5:00 to 6:00 in the evening.

The original sentence has filler words 'uh', comma splices, and inconsistencies: 'one of the most, easiest' is incorrect and 'way' should be plural 'ways' to match 'one of the'. Also 'bikes' as plural should be referred to with 'they' instead of repeating 'bikes'. 'Duty hours' is unclear; 'rush hours' is a better collocation. The corrected sentence removes fillers, fixes the modifier order, uses plural agreement ('ways'), and clarifies time ranges. Suggest practicing concise sentences, avoiding fillers, and ensuring noun-pronoun agreement and correct plural forms.