Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (use correct tense and articles), simplify and make sentences natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a pink bike when I was eight, and I loved it. Although it was very cute, it often broke down because the chain was loose. Because of that, my parents had to take it to a repair shop several times.

Gợi ý: Use full sentences and include linking words for coherence. Provide a specific reason and a realistic estimate or example, and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Avoid vague phrases like “like 80%” without context.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Vietnam because many people prefer bicycles and motorbikes for short trips and commuting. For example, students often ride bikes to school, and many streets are crowded with two-wheelers during rush hour.

× Yet yes, I have a bike when I was 8 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 8 years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was 8 years old.' Use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Also 'Yet yes' is unnatural; use 'Yes' or 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: use 'Yes, I had a bike when I was 8.'

× I love that bike very much, a pink bike that very very cute, but it breaks quite a work not so well.

✓ I loved that bike very much. It was a pink bike and very, very cute, but it broke down quite often and did not work very well.

Multiple issues: tense should be past ('loved', 'was', 'broke down') to match childhood context (Present tense used incorrectly). The phrase 'that very very cute' needs a verb 'was' and punctuation. 'Breaks quite a work not so well' is ungrammatical; likely meaning 'broke down quite often and did not work very well.' Suggestions: keep consistent past tense and use clear verbs ('was', 'broke down', 'did not work').

× In my opinion, yes. Bike very popular in my country because I live in Vietnam and people prefer to use bike and motorbike to go to work and school.

✓ In my opinion, yes. Bikes are very popular in my country because I live in Vietnam and people prefer to use bicycles and motorbikes to go to work and school.

Subject-verb agreement and missing 'to be' verb: 'Bike very popular' lacks 'are' and 'bike' should be plural 'bikes.' Also 'bicycle' is more natural than 'bike' in formal response, and 'motorbike' pluralized. Suggestions: include 'are' for present simple and pluralize nouns when speaking generally ('Bikes are very popular').

× So I think like 80% of Vietnamese children use bike.

✓ So I think about 80% of Vietnamese children use bikes.

Use 'about' instead of colloquial 'like' for approximate percentages and plural 'bikes' for general use. Also maintain present simple 'use' which is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: say 'about 80% of Vietnamese children use bikes.'