Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Rút gọn và sắp xếp câu để tự nhiên hơn; tránh lặp từ như "it's a it's a"; (2) Sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể; (3) Chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "so that" không đúng ngữ cảnh; nên dùng "so"). Cụ thể, trả lời trong tối đa 4-5 câu, kết hợp từ nối như "because" hoặc "so" để logic hơn.

Ví dụ: I didn't have my own bike as a child because I was an only child and my parents thought cycling on the busy roads was too dangerous. As a result, I usually rode my friends' bikes when I visited them, but I never had one to keep at home.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Tránh tiếng ừ, à (fillers) quá nhiều; thuyết phục hơn bằng cách đưa ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh; (2) Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: "the cost of a bike is much lower"; "bikes are very environmentally friendly"); (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý: "because... and..." hoặc "not only... but also..."

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars and public transport for short trips. Moreover, many people prefer cycling since it is environmentally friendly and helps them avoid traffic jams during rush hour.

× To be honest, I didn't have my own bike because I am the only child in the family, so that my parents think that it's a it's a very dangerous if I have my own bike.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have my own bike because I was the only child in the family, so my parents thought it would be very dangerous if I had my own bike.

Errors: incorrect tense consistency, incorrect conjunction 'so that', awkward repetition and modal phrasing. Reasons and suggestions: Use past tense throughout to match the time frame (use 'was', 'thought', 'had'). Replace 'so that' with 'so' because 'so that' implies purpose; here cause/result needs 'so'. Use 'it would be very dangerous' to report the parents' belief in the past (conditional). Remove repeated 'it's a'. Improve sentence flow: 'I was the only child... so my parents thought it would be very dangerous if I had my own bike.'

× Definitely yes, because uh, the cost for a bike, umm, is much cheaper than the other transport or vehicle and the another reason is that by a very uh, environ friendly for environment.

✓ Definitely yes, because the cost of a bike is much lower than other forms of transport, and another reason is that bikes are very environmentally friendly.

Errors: incorrect article use ('the cost for a bike' -> 'the cost of a bike'), incorrect comparative phrasing ('much cheaper than the other transport or vehicle'), redundant words ('the another'), incorrect structure ('by a very... for environment'), and wrong adjective form ('environ friendly'). Reasons and suggestions: Use 'cost of' not 'cost for', compare to 'other forms of transport' or 'other vehicles' without 'the' and 'or'. Use 'another reason' (no 'the'). Use 'bikes are very environmentally friendly' to use the correct adjective form and clear subject-verb structure. Remove filler words (uh, umm) in formal responses.