Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and tense consistency, make the answer more natural and concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct articles and verb forms (e.g., “I had a bike,” “it was a gift,” “I didn’t know how to ride”). Keep responses to a maximum of five sentences and avoid irrelevant information such as specific college stages unless it adds value.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bicycle that my aunt gave me as a present, and I loved it very much. However, I used training wheels because I didn’t know how to ride without them. I kept it until I was older, but I still hadn’t learned to ride a two-wheeler by the time I went to college.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary, correct word choice and sentence structure, and organize ideas with linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use accurate nouns (e.g., “bikes” not “Spike”) and improve fluency by removing hesitations and redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Because many areas are urban, cycling is often the cheapest and quickest way to travel short distances. Moreover, bike-sharing schemes are widespread and inexpensive if you subscribe to a monthly card, so many people use them for commuting and short errands.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'have' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past simple for states or possessions in the past (I had, I lived, I owned).

× it was an gift from my dearest aunt.

✓ it was a gift from my dearest aunt.

The indefinite article 'a' cannot be used before a word that begins with a vowel sound when the correct article is 'an'; however 'gift' begins with a consonant sound, so 'an' is incorrect. Use 'a gift'. Suggestion: Check the initial sound of the following word to choose 'a' or 'an'. 'a gift' is correct.

× I really love it, but it was like with four wheels because I wasn't really know how to ride a bike.

✓ I really loved it, but it had four wheels because I didn't really know how to ride a bike.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'love' should be past 'loved' to match 'was' and the childhood time frame. 'was like with four wheels' is unnatural; use 'had four wheels'. 'wasn't really know' mixes past negative auxiliary with base verb; correct form is 'didn't really know'. Suggestion: Keep past simple consistent for actions/states in the past and use correct past negative ('didn't know').

× And then when I went to college, I still didn't learn how to ride A2 wheel bike.

✓ And then when I went to college, I still hadn't learned how to ride a two-wheeled bike.

Tense and article/number phrasing: 'didn't learn' is simple past but the action of not having learned by that time is better expressed with past perfect 'hadn't learned'. 'A2 wheel bike' is incorrect phrasing; use 'a two-wheeled bike' or 'a bike with two wheels'. Suggestion: Use past perfect to show an action not completed before another past event and write numbers as words in normal text ('two-wheeled').

× Yeah, Spike is really popular in my country because our country is full of urban areas.

✓ Yeah, bikes are really popular in my country because our country has many urban areas.

'Spike' is likely a mispronunciation or wrong word; context requires 'bikes'. Also 'is full of urban areas' is awkward; use 'has many urban areas' or 'is very urbanized'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun and simpler structure: 'bikes are popular because our country has many urban areas.'

× So the cheapest and the most convenient way for not so far is to ride a bike.

✓ So the cheapest and most convenient way to travel short distances is to ride a bike.

Phrase 'for not so far' is ungrammatical; use 'for short distances' or 'to travel short distances'. Also remove the redundant 'the' before 'most convenient' when using parallel adjectives. Suggestion: Use 'to travel short distances' and keep adjective coordination consistent: 'the cheapest and most convenient way to...'.

× And we have shared bikes everywhere and it was really cheap and it's a good budget if you buy the if you subscribe the card for it.

✓ We have shared bikes everywhere; they are really cheap, and it's economical if you subscribe for the card.

Mixed tenses and pronoun references: 'we have shared bikes' (present perfect) is fine, but 'it was really cheap' conflicts—use present 'they are really cheap'. 'it's a good budget' is incorrect collocation; use 'it's economical' or 'it's inexpensive'. 'if you buy the if you subscribe the card for it' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'if you subscribe for the card' or 'if you buy a subscription'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent, use plural pronoun for 'bikes' ('they'), and choose correct collocations: 'they are really cheap' and 'it's economical if you subscribe.'