Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two supporting details. Avoid hesitations and self-corrections. Use linking words if you add more information (for example: “and,” “so,” “because”). Keep your answer to no more than five sentences and use specific details (age, type of bike, who taught you).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was three years old because my mother bought it for me. It was a small red tricycle, and my father taught me how to pedal in our backyard. I remember practicing every afternoon until I could ride without help.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Remove filler words like “umm.” Use linking words (for example: “because,” “for example,” “however”) to make the response coherent. Provide more precise facts or comparisons (e.g., who uses bikes, for what purposes, and a short example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many children and students use them to travel to school. For example, in my neighborhood most pupils ride bicycles to avoid traffic, and some adults use them for short commutes or exercise.

× Yes, when I was in No, When I was three years old, my mom bought me a bike.

✓ Yes. When I was three years old, my mom bought me a bike.

The original contains redundant and misplaced words ('in No') and an incorrect capitalisation/ punctuation causing a run-on. This is a sentence structure error: remove the unwanted fragment and separate into a clear response and a complete sentence. Suggestion: answer briefly then give the full sentence: 'Yes. When I was three years old, my mom bought me a bike.' Ensure correct punctuation and capitalization. (grammar_problem_type_id:26)

× I think bikes are popular in our country because umm, more children are using bikes and they also use it for their service to go in their school.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because more children use them, and they also use them to go to school.

The sentence misuses pronouns ('it' referring to 'bikes') and has awkward phrasing ('for their service to go in their school'). This is an incorrect use of pronouns and unclear phrasing: use 'them' to refer to plural 'bikes', use simple present 'use' for habitual actions, and correct prepositional phrase to 'go to school'. Suggestion: say 'more children use them' and 'use them to go to school' for clarity and correct pronoun agreement. (grammar_problem_type_id:12)