Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, concise and accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid confusing or incorrect phrases (e.g. “younger than my parents” is wrong here), correct small grammar errors, and use linking words to make the story coherent. Keep answers under five sentences. Add one or two specific, concrete details (where you rode, what you enjoyed) and correct punctuation.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small blue bicycle when I was a child. I rode it every afternoon around my neighborhood, and sometimes I cycled with my cousin to explore nearby streets and parks. I enjoyed racing him and learning to balance on narrow paths, which made me more confident on the road.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, correct word choice and grammar, and support with specific reasons and an example. Replace incorrect words (“communicate”) with accurate ones (“commute”), correct plural/singular and possessive errors, and use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to connect ideas. Limit to up to five sentences and include a brief statistic or typical scenario to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are inexpensive and practical, especially with rising petrol prices. For example, in my city many commuters cycle to the metro station and park their bikes there, which saves time and money.

× Yes, I had a blue bicycle when I was younger than my parents.

✓ Yes, I had a blue bicycle when I was a child.

The phrase 'younger than my parents' is awkward and unclear for describing childhood; it is not a standard way to indicate childhood. Use 'when I was a child' to match the past-tense question and clearly express the time period. Suggestion: replace ambiguous comparative expression with a standard time phrase.

× For me, I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood and sometimes I would go cycling with my cousin so we could explore nearby St. and. Bikes.

✓ I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood, and sometimes I would go cycling with my cousin so we could explore nearby streets and parks.

The original sentence contains several issues: 'For me' is unnecessary and awkward; 'nearby St. and. Bikes' appears to be fragmented and incorrect—likely intended 'streets and parks' or similar. Also punctuation and conjunctions need fixing. The verb forms 'used to ride' and 'would go cycling' are correct for habitual past, so keep them. Suggestion: remove 'For me', correct the place nouns to meaningful words, and fix punctuation.

× Many people use them to communicate, to work or schools because they are inexpensive and practical, especially now petrols prices.

✓ Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are inexpensive and practical, especially now that petrol prices are high.

'Use them to communicate' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'commute'. 'To work or schools' mixes preposition and noun number—use 'to commute to work or school'. 'Petrols prices' is incorrect pluralization and missing connector; use 'petrol prices' and include 'now that' to link the reason. Suggestion: replace 'communicate' with 'commute', correct noun forms and add 'now that' for clarity.

× So I use it everywhere, almost everywhere.

✓ So I use them almost everywhere.

Pronoun reference mismatch: 'bicycles' was the plural subject earlier, so referring back should use the plural pronoun 'them', not 'it'. Also 'everywhere, almost everywhere' is repetitive; 'almost everywhere' is sufficient. Suggestion: use consistent plural pronoun and avoid redundancy.