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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have. When I was a child I always practiced to light it on. My friends always taught me how to ride a bike sometime my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, but depend on legends in con in countryside is more popular than very cities because country uh countryside has huge.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が分かるが、文法・語順・語彙の誤りが多く、発音や時制の一致も必要です。まず時制を過去形に統一し、簡潔なトピック文を用意しましょう。次にSupporting detailとして「誰が」「いつ」「どのように」教えたかを具体的に述べ、接続語(for example, then, so)を使って流れを整えてください。例:主語+過去形の動詞で始め、1〜2文の具体例を付け足す。発音練習ではride, taught, practice, oftenなどの語に注意してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about seven. My friends helped me by running alongside me at first, and then one of them held the seat until I could balance. After a few weeks I could ride confidently on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が伝わるが、語順・語彙選択が不自然で文が断片的です。まず明確なトピック文で結論を示し、その後に比較を示す短い理由文を1〜2文加えてください。比較表現(more popular in the countryside than in cities)や具体的な理由(less traffic, cheaper, more space)を使うと説得力が増します。不要な曖昧語(legends, con, very)やあいまいな発声を避け、短く明瞭に話す練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think they are quite popular, especially in the countryside. Bikes are more common in rural areas than in cities because there is less traffic and people travel shorter distances, so cycling is convenient and inexpensive.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have.

Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses past tense. The student's reply 'Yes, I have.' incorrectly uses present perfect. Use simple past 'did' to match the past context. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

Verb + -ing form

× When I was a child I always practiced to light it on.

When I was a child I always practised getting on it.

The verb 'practiced' (practised) should be followed by a gerund when describing an activity: 'practised getting on it' or 'practised mounting it.' The phrase 'to light it on' is ungrammatical and likely a vocabulary mistake. Use 'getting on it' or 'riding it' to convey learning to ride. Also match past tense 'was'.

Sentence structure errors

× My friends always taught me how to ride a bike sometime my friends.

My friends always taught me how to ride a bike sometimes.

The sentence repeats 'my friends' and misplaces 'sometime'. Remove the redundant phrase and use the adverb 'sometimes' at the end: 'My friends always taught me how to ride a bike sometimes.' However, 'always' and 'sometimes' conflict; choose one: 'My friends always taught me how to ride' or 'Sometimes my friends taught me how to ride.' Suggestion: 'My friends taught me how to ride a bike.'

Incorrect use of conjunction / Sentence structure errors

× Yes, but depend on legends in con in countryside is more popular than very cities because country uh countryside has huge.

Yes, but it depends on the region; bikes are more popular in the countryside than in cities because the countryside has wide open areas.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing subject 'it' for 'depends', incorrect words 'legends in con', and repetition 'country uh countryside'. Also 'very cities' is wrong; use 'cities'. Rephrase for clarity and correct grammar: use 'it depends on the region', comparative structure 'more popular in the countryside than in cities', and provide a clear reason 'because the countryside has wide open areas.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

LightBright; Animate; Flimsy; Nimble; Gentle
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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