Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Whenever child at that time I don't have bike bike because I don't have a license to drive it on, drive it legally on the road. Instead of this, I prefer to ride with my father on the back seat.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well I think Bisar being popular in my country as I live in country in India which is where narrow roads and that's why most of Reaper prefer to ride the bike as well as it is a it save lots of money which we have to send spend on the car.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (tense, articles) and avoid repetition. For example, say you didn’t own a bike, explain the reason briefly, and mention an alternative activity with a linking word like "so" or "instead". Keep it to 2–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child because I was too young to ride on roads legally. Instead, I often rode on the back of my father's bike, which felt fun and safe, so I still enjoyed biking experiences.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific reasons with clear linking words and correct vocabulary. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid filler words. Mention 2–3 concrete reasons (e.g., narrow roads, cost, traffic) and use connectors like "because", "so", or "also". Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because many streets are narrow and easier to navigate by two-wheelers. Also, bikes are more affordable and cheaper to maintain than cars, so many people choose them for daily commuting.
× Whenever child at that time I don't have bike bike because I don't have a license to drive it on, drive it legally on the road.
✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike because I didn't have a license to ride it legally on the road; instead, I preferred to sit on the back seat with my father.
Errors: incorrect sentence structure, missing subject/tense forms, repetition ('bike bike'), wrong verb for riding a bike, and awkward phrase order. Correction fixes word order ('When I was a child'), uses past tense consistently ('didn't have', 'didn't have', 'preferred'), removes repetition, uses 'ride' for bicycles, and improves phrasing ('sit on the back seat with my father'). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use clear subject-verb-object order; avoid repeating words.
× Well I think Bisar being popular in my country as I live in country in India which is where narrow roads and that's why most of Reaper prefer to ride the bike as well as it is a it save lots of money which we have to send spend on the car.
✓ Well, I think bikes are popular in my country, India, because roads are narrow and most people prefer to ride bikes; they also save a lot of money compared with cars.
Errors: wrong word forms ('Bisar', 'Reaper'), incorrect verb forms ('being popular'), article and preposition errors, and awkward phrasing ('it is a it save'). Correction uses plural noun 'bikes' and present simple 'are popular', clarifies 'India' with commas, uses 'roads are narrow' and 'most people prefer', and replaces 'save a lot of money' with proper comparison. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary, maintain subject-verb agreement, and choose concise expressions (e.g., 'save a lot of money compared with cars').