Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and use a clear topic sentence. Fix tense and pronoun errors (use 'when I was a child'). Give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because/so). Keep it under five sentences and avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I had a bike and I loved it. For example, the frame was bright red and it had a comfortable seat, so I rode it to visit friends every day. It was also convenient for short trips to the market.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and use linking words (however, but, because). Correct grammar (e.g., 'bikes weren't popular' or 'weren't very popular' and 'it's becoming more popular'). Avoid repetition and filler words; limit to three or four sentences.

Ví dụ: I think bikes weren't very popular in my country in the past, but they are becoming more common now. This is because cities are improving bike lanes and many people prefer bikes for short commutes. As a result, more people use bicycles for daily travel.

× When I wear, when I wear a child, I uh, of course I have a bike that umm, I love it. I really love it my bike because uh, my bag was so beautiful and the convenience uh, to using everyday umm.

✓ When I was a child, of course I had a bike that I loved. I really loved my bike because it was very beautiful and convenient to use every day.

The original contains multiple sentence structure and tense issues. 'When I wear, when I wear a child' is incorrect word choice and structure; the correct phrase is 'When I was a child' (past tense and correct verb 'was'). 'I have a bike' should be past tense 'I had' to match the time frame (past). 'I love it' should be 'I loved it' for consistency. 'My bag was so beautiful' likely intends 'my bike was so beautiful'; this is a lexical mistake causing confusion. 'The convenience to using everyday' is ungrammatical; the correct expression is 'convenient to use every day' (adjective 'convenient' + infinitive 'to use' and 'every day' as two words). Suggestion: clearly set the time frame first, maintain consistent past tense for events in childhood, use correct vocabulary (bike vs bag), and use standard adjective + to-infinitive structure for purpose or use.

× Uh, honestly, in my country, bikes aren't popular, but nowadays it's improving developing that, uh, most people using bikes every day in their daily life.

✓ Honestly, in my country, bikes aren't very popular, but recently their use has been increasing, and nowadays many people use bikes every day in their daily life.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. 'It's improving developing that' is ungrammatical—use a noun phrase or present perfect progressive: 'their use has been increasing' or 'bicycle usage is increasing.' 'Most people using bikes' lacks a finite verb; it should be 'many people use bikes.' Suggestion: use a clear subject and finite verb ('use' or 'has been increasing') and keep tense consistent for current trends (present simple or present perfect for ongoing change).

× So, and I would say that nowadays using bikes is so comfortable and most people use.

✓ So, I would say that nowadays using bikes is very convenient, and many people do use them.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Using bikes is so comfortable' is acceptable but 'comfortable' is not the best collocation; 'convenient' fits better. 'Most people use.' is a sentence fragment because it lacks an object; it should specify what people use ('them' referring to bikes) or be rephrased as 'many people do use them.' Suggestion: complete the clause by providing the object pronoun or rephrase to a full clause and choose appropriate adjectives (convenient rather than comfortable) for talking about practicality.