BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

It's not really that famous. We mostly use cars. We don't use bikes for transfer, for transportation.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct and natural but very short and repetitive. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how often you rode, or what you used it for). Use a linking word to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same verb form.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about seven. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, and it was how I learned to be independent and make friends in the area.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the main point but contains awkward phrasing and repetition. Improve by using clearer phrasing (e.g., “popular” instead of “famous”), combining sentences with linking words, and adding a specific reason or brief example to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Not really — bicycles aren't very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, public roads and long commutes make driving more practical than cycling for daily transport.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× It's not really that famous.

Bicycles are not really that popular.

The original sentence uses 'famous' which is odd for objects like bicycles in this context and 'It' is vague; this is a sentence choice/structure problem. Use 'Bicycles' as the subject to match the question about bikes and use 'popular' rather than 'famous' to convey common usage. Also choose plural to match general reference.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× We mostly use cars.

We mostly use cars for transportation.

The original sentence is not incorrect grammatically but lacks the object that clarifies the comparison; adding 'for transportation' makes the meaning explicit. This addresses pronoun/reference clarity and completes the thought.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× We don't use bikes for transfer, for transportation.

We don't use bikes for transportation.

'Transfer' is not the correct noun here; 'transportation' is the appropriate noun. Also repeating 'for' twice is redundant. Use the preposition 'for' + noun 'transportation' to indicate purpose. This corrects preposition and word choice errors.

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