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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I am child and I used to travel a lot with that.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are most common in our country because everyone need in their daily life. We have to travel from one place to another and it helps us to travel from one place to another.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: Be careful with verb tense and subject–verb agreement. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I rode it every weekend to visit my grandparents, and it helped me feel independent. For example, I used to cycle three miles each way along a quiet country lane.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, polished topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add a specific reason or an example. Check grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and choose varied vocabulary instead of repeating the same phrase.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very common in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people cycle to work or the market, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I had a bike when I am child and I used to travel a lot with that.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to travel a lot on it.

The clause refers to a past time ('when I ... child'), so the correct verb is past tense 'was' rather than present 'am' (Past tense issue). Also, use the preposition 'on' for traveling by bike and add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Yes, bikes are most common in our country because everyone need in their daily life.

Yes, bikes are very common in our country because everyone needs them in their daily life.

'Most common' is acceptable but 'very common' is more natural here; the main errors are quantifier/word choice and subject-verb agreement. 'Everyone' is singular and requires 'needs' (third person singular). Also 'need in their daily life' is incorrect: use 'needs them in their daily life' to refer to bikes (Incorrect use of quantifiers and subject-verb agreement).

Present tense issue

× We have to travel from one place to another and it helps us to travel from one place to another.

We have to travel from one place to another, and they help us do that.

The sentence is repetitive and uses 'it' ambiguously. 'Bikes' is plural, so refer with 'they' and 'help us do that' is more natural than 'helps us to travel from one place to another.' Also ensure present tense agreement between subject and verb (Present tense issue).

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