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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think said bikes are common in my country, but I don't drive a bike.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Ответ точный, но очень короткий и повторяет часть вопроса. Стоит начать с более естественного вступления и добавить одну-две конкретные детали (например, какой это был велосипед, кто вам его подарил или как часто вы на нём катались). Также следите за разнообразием лексики и избегайте тавтологии.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it almost every day around the neighborhood until I was about twelve.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматическую ошибку и неестественную формулировку («said bikes»). Кроме того, предложение короткое и объяснение очень поверхностное. Нужна корректная связность: сначала дать общее мнение, затем поддержать его конкретными причинами или примерами и объяснить личную позицию с плавным связующим словом.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because cities are compact and many people use them for short trips. However, I don't cycle myself since I prefer public transport and find traffic busy where I live.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect word choice / collocation (treated as Sentence structure errors)

× I think said bikes are common in my country, but I don't drive a bike.

I think bikes are common in my country, but I don't ride a bike.

The phrase 'said bikes' is an incorrect formal reference in spoken English and creates a sentence structure error; use 'bikes' or 'those bikes' instead. Also, 'drive a bike' is not idiomatic in English; for bicycles use the verb 'ride'. Suggestion: remove 'said' and replace 'drive' with 'ride' to be natural and grammatically correct.

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