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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do 'cause you can see the bike everywhere in the street.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,并且没有给出任何信息。需要直接回答问题并补充一两句具体细节,例如什么时候得到的、使用频率或与你童年经历的关联。注意回答要自然、简洁(不超过5句),并使用连接词来丰富表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because our neighborhood was small and safe, cycling became my main way of getting around during childhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接但过于简单,口语缩写('cause)和非正式表达影响得分。建议用更标准的表达并加入具体细节或比较,如使用范围(城市或乡村)、原因(环保、交通便利)或举例来支持观点,同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。保持答案在最多五句之内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular, especially in cities. Many people choose them because they are cheap, convenient and good for the environment. For example, I often see commuters cycling to work during rush hour instead of driving.

Ngữ pháp

There be issue

× Yes, I do 'cause you can see the bike everywhere in the street.

Yes, I do, 'cause you can see bikes everywhere in the streets.

错误类型:There be issue(存在/可数名词单复数与限定词使用问题)。解释:原句中使用了单数名词 the bike 与 everywhere 不匹配。表示某事物普遍存在时应使用复数(bikes)或不定冠词的泛指形式;另外 the street 暗指某一条街,若指城市中到处都是自行车,应使用复数复数名词 streets 或省略冠词。建议:把 the bike 改为复数 bikes,把 the street 改为 streets 或直接说 everywhere(例如:you can see bikes everywhere)。此外在口语中可在 do 和 'cause 之间加逗号或停顿,写作中写成 because 或 'cause 的非正式缩写。

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