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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I'm not a person who good at, umm, riding the bike. So my parents, they don't want me, wanted to buy a bike to me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bike is very popular in China. Most people are riding, sharing bikes to go to the work.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确,避免重复与口头禅。先用一句明确的主题句回答,如“No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.” 然后简要解释原因,注意时态和句子结构,去掉多余的停顿词(如 umm)并使用正确的短语(例如 “buy a bike for me”)。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought I wasn't good at riding, so they never bought one for me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要自然流畅并提供具体细节。注意名词单复数和固定表达(例如 “bicycles are popular” 和 “go to work”)。使用连接词让句子更连贯,并给出具体例子或原因,如共享单车的普及和通勤便利性。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China. For example, many people use shared bikes and public bike lanes to commute because they are cheap and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I'm not a person who good at, umm, riding the bike.

No, I'm not a person who is good at riding a bike.

原句中缺少系动词“is”,并且“good at”后接动名词形式“riding”;此外“the bike”在泛指个人骑自行车能力时应使用不定冠词“a”。改正建议:在“who”和“good”之间加上“is”,将“riding the bike”改为“riding a bike”。

Sentence structure errors

× So my parents, they don't want me, wanted to buy a bike to me.

So my parents didn't want to buy a bike for me.

原句混合了现在时和过去时(don't want 与 wanted),时态使用不一致且语序错误。“buy a bike to me”是不正确的搭配,应使用介词短语“buy ... for me”。改正建议:根据上下文使用过去时“didn't want”,并把短语改为“buy a bike for me”。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think bike is very popular in China.

Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China.

当讨论某类事物的普遍性时,应使用复数“bikes”或不可数表达。原句使用单数“bike”不合适。改正建议:将“bike”改为复数“bikes”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Most people are riding, sharing bikes to go to the work.

Most people ride or use shared bikes to go to work.

原句问题包括不必要的进行时“are riding”与逗号用法、动词并列形式不当、以及“to the work”中的定冠词“the”不应出现。提议使用一般现在时“ride”或“use”来表达常态行为,将“sharing bikes”改为“use shared bikes/ share bikes”,并去掉“the”。改正建议:改为“ride or use shared bikes to go to work”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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