Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. When I go to school I usually tries to ride my bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course I think it did. Nowadays, people usually choose to ride a bike to go outside.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 语法和时态错误较多,表达不自然且有冗余。回答应直接用正确的过去时并做简单扩展。建议: 1) 把主要句子用简单明确的过去时表达(例如“I had a bike.”)。 2) 用1–2个支持细节,用连词保持连贯(例如“so I often rode it to school”)。 3) 注意主谓一致和动词形式(例如“tried/rode”,不是“tries”或“have”用于过去)。 4) 将答案控制在最多5句内,避免重复信息。
Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day because it was faster than walking. Sometimes my friends and I would race on the way home, which was fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 时态和词汇使用不当,逻辑衔接弱。应直接回答并给出明确原因或例子。建议: 1) 使用现在时回答普遍现象(例如“Yes, bikes are popular.”)。 2) 提供1–2个具体原因或例子,使用连接词(because, so, for example)。 3) 注意词汇搭配(例如“ride a bike”或“use bicycles”,避免“go outside”模糊表达)。 4) 保持句子简洁,不要混用过去和现在时。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips to save money and avoid traffic. For example, students and office workers often cycle to work or school, especially in big cities.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是过去的状态(小时候有一辆自行车),应使用一般过去时。原句使用现在时的 have 与 when I was a child(过去时间状语)时态不一致。建议把 have 改为过去式 had,以保持时态一致。
× When I go to school I usually tries to ride my bike.
✓ When I went to school I usually tried to ride my bike.
句子叙述过去习惯,应使用一般过去时。原句使用现在时 go 和第三人称单数 tries(但主语是 I,不应用第三人称单数)时态和人称都错误。将 go 改为过去式 went,将 tries 改为过去式 tried,并注意主语 I 不加 -s。若想表达现在的习惯,应改为: When I go to school I usually try to ride my bike(如果是现在)。
× Of course I think it did.
✓ Of course I think it does.
考官问的是现在自行车是否在国内受欢迎,回答应对应现在时。原句使用过去式 did 与 I think 搭配不自然且与问题时态不符。将 did 改为现在时 does,或更自然地说:Of course I think so. 或 Of course I think they are popular. 提示:根据问题时态选择现在时或现在完成时。
× Nowadays, people usually choose to ride a bike to go outside.
✓ Nowadays, people usually choose to ride a bike to go out.
短语 go outside 在此语境下不太自然,常用 go out 表示外出;时态用现在习惯时(usually choose)是正确的。将 go outside 改为更地道的 go out。