Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using a concise topic sentence, correcting minor grammar, and adding one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like “actually”. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences. For example, start with a direct statement, then add when/how you learned to ride and a brief memory or result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My mother bought it when I was five, and I used it regularly until I was ten. I learned to ride on the pavement in front of our house, which helped me become more independent and confident. Because of that, I kept riding whenever the weather was good.

Gợi ý: Your response addresses the question but is disorganized and contains hesitations, repetition, and grammar issues. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using linking words (however, because, for example), and providing specific reasons or comparisons. Use correct vocabulary (motorcycle, sport bikes → sportbikes) and avoid filler phrases. Keep to 2–4 coherent sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — bicycles are less common now. Most people prefer cars or motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. However, some young people still ride sportbikes for leisure or commuting in cities, especially where public transport is scarce.

× I did actually. When I was 5 my mom bought me a bike and I used that on until the very age of 10.

✓ I did, actually. When I was five, my mom bought me a bike and I used it until I was ten.

The sentence has issues with past-tense phrasing and pronoun choice. Use commas for natural pauses ('I did, actually'). Numbers under ten are usually written as words in formal writing ('five', 'ten'). 'Used that on' is ungrammatical; use 'used it' and match the time expression 'until I was ten' to show duration in the past. Also add a comma after the introductory time clause for clarity.

× Not really. I mean, at least not as it used to.

✓ Not really. I mean, at least not as much as it used to be.

The original sentence omits a comparison element. The phrase 'as it used to' is incomplete; add 'be' to form the full comparative structure 'as it used to be' or add 'much' to indicate degree ('as much as it used to be'). This corrects the present-tense comparison.

× But nowadays most people drive a car or at least a motor motorcycle.

✓ But nowadays most people drive cars or at least motorcycles.

'Most people' should be followed by a plural noun: 'cars' and 'motorcycles'. 'A motor motorcycle' is redundant and singular; use the plural forms to match the quantifier 'most'. Also 'motorcycle' already implies 'motor' so 'motor' is unnecessary.

× And bikes are sometimes, well, when it comes to bikes, most people here drive or ride, actually ride a sport bikes, yeah.

✓ And bikes are sometimes used, but when it comes to bikes, most people here drive or ride; actually, they ride sport bikes.

The original sentence has awkward repetition and incorrect adjective-noun agreement. 'Ride a sport bikes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'bikes' and misplaces 'sport'. Correct form is 'they ride sport bikes' or 'they ride a sport bike'. Also restructure the sentence to remove redundancy ('bikes are sometimes' then repeating 'when it comes to bikes') and add a subject 'they' for clarity.