Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Uh, I got my first bike when I was 12. I think it's not a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, especially when you see in the city there are many E bikes because it's in the city is other traffic is always very busy, so people take the E bikes to.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、直接并且结构清晰。开头应直接回应问题,然后给出简短的补充细节,避免犹豫词(如“uh”)和模糊表述。“I think it's not a child” 这句不明确且不必要,可改为说明12岁获得自行车的感受或理由。可以用连接词(for example, because)使表达更连贯。控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. I got my first bike when I was 12, which felt more like a gift for growing up. For example, my parents bought it so I could ride to school, and I remember being excited to explore my neighborhood on it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更流畅、用词准确并避免语法错误。先给出直接观点,再用一两句具体原因或例子支持,使用连接词(for example, because, therefore)。修正语法和重复,如“because it's in the city is other traffic is always very busy”应改为简洁的因果句。句子不要未完结。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially e-bikes. This is because urban traffic is often congested, so many people choose e-bikes as a faster and cheaper way to commute. For example, commuters often ride e-bikes to work to avoid buses and save time.
× I think it's not a child.
✓ I think that wasn't a childhood bike.
原句“I think it's not a child.” 在时态和表达上不合适。面试者想表达“我觉得那不算是童年时的自行车/那不是小时候的自行车”。因为前句提到“I got my first bike when I was 12.”(过去发生的事),此处应使用与过去相关的表达,不能用现在时“it's”。建议使用过去或完成时描述过去的事,例如“wasn't a childhood bike”或更自然的“wasn't really a childhood bike”。另外,原句的结构和词汇选择(“a child”用来指代自行车是错误的名词选择)也不恰当,应使用“childhood bike/childhood bicycle”。
× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, especially when you see in the city there are many E bikes because it's in the city is other traffic is always very busy, so people take the E bikes to.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country. In the cities there are many e-bikes because traffic is always very busy, so people take e-bikes.
原句中存在时态和句子结构混乱,重复短语(“in the city”和“it's in the city is”)以及多余或错误的介词和代词。应将长句拆成更清晰的句子:使用简单现在时描述一般事实(bikes are very popular; traffic is always very busy),并使用复数形式“cities”和“e-bikes”。去掉多余的词“when you see”和句末多余的“to”。建议练习将复杂想法分成短句,注意不要重复地点短语并使用正确的名词复数形式。