Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation fillers and incomplete sentences. For example, say you had a pink small bike, where and when you rode it, and mention who taught or accompanied you with a full verb phrase.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small pink bike when I was a child. I used to ride it in the park every weekend, and my father often came with me to teach and supervise me.

Gợi ý: Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary. Begin with a direct opinion, then add specific reasons and one example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and avoid repetitions and fillers. Clarify what 'U bike' means (a public bike-sharing scheme).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic. For example, our city has a public bike-sharing system called "UBike," which anyone can rent for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Grammar problem type ID:5 Past tense issue. The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with the past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for events that happened in childhood. For example, 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Uh, it's a pink and small bike.

✓ It was a small pink bike.

Grammar problem type ID:18 Incorrect order of adjectives and 6 Present tense issue (should be past). Adjective order in English places size before colour ('small pink' rather than 'pink and small'), and the context refers to the past so the verb should be past tense 'was'. Suggestion: Use the natural adjective order and past tense: 'It was a small pink bike.'

× I like to drive it in the park on the holiday.

✓ I liked riding it in the park on holidays.

Grammar problem type ID:6 Present tense issue and 8 Verb + -ing form. The speaker is describing habitual past activity, so use past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'riding' (not 'to drive' for bicycle) and plural 'holidays' or 'on holiday' depending on dialect. Suggestion: For past habitual activities use past tense plus gerund: 'I liked riding it in the park on holidays.' or 'I liked riding it in the park on the weekends.'

× My father will.

✓ My father taught me / My father bought it for me.

Grammar problem type ID:7 Future tense issue and 26 Sentence structure errors. 'My father will.' is an incomplete sentence and unclear. The speaker likely intended to say what the father did (past) such as 'My father bought it for me' or 'My father taught me to ride.' Use a full clause in past tense to match context. Suggestion: Replace with a complete past-tense clause e.g. 'My father bought it for me.' or 'My father taught me to ride.'

× Uh, yes, I think bike are popular in my country because a lot of people will uh, drive it to work and our country has U bike to for for public.

✓ Uh, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people ride them to work, and our country has public U-bike services.

Grammar problem type ID:1 Singular and plural issue, 27 Subject-verb agreement errors, 8 Verb + -ing form, 11 Incorrect use of prepositions, 26 Sentence structure errors. 'Bike are' should be plural 'bikes are'. 'Will drive it' is incorrect for habitual action; use present simple 'ride them'. Use correct pronoun 'them' for plural. 'Our country has U bike to for for public' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'has public U-bike services' or 'has U-bike systems for the public.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns, present simple for general truths, correct pronouns and clearer noun phrases: 'I think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people ride them to work, and we have public U-bike services.'

× Everybody can.

✓ Everybody can use them.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors and 12 Incorrect use of pronouns. 'Everybody can.' is incomplete; the modal 'can' needs a verb. Add the verb 'use' and refer to the bikes with 'them' to complete the idea. Suggestion: Complete the sentence: 'Everybody can use them.'