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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It's a yellow bike I remember and I really like it. I I run it every day after school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely. Because we, uh, you know, in China, not everyone have car and back is a convenience transport. And for example, I ride bike every day, uh, go to company.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 句子要更自然并注意时态与语法错误。回答应有一个清晰的主题句,随后用一两句具体细节支撑,并控制总句子数在五句以内。避免重复(例如“I I”)和不正确的动词搭配(如“run it”应替换)。可以补充简短的具体细节(什么时候、和谁、做什么、感觉如何)。

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bright yellow bicycle when I was a child. I rode it home from school every day with my friends, and we often raced each other in the park. I loved that bike because it made me feel independent and happy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 需要更流利、语法正确并使用连接词使回答更连贯。注意主谓一致("not everyone has a car"),词汇准确("bike is a convenient form of transport"),以及减少填充词("uh, you know")。先给出直接答案,然后用一两句具体例子或原因支持,保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. In China many people do not own cars, so bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to travel. For example, I commute to work by bike every day because it is fast and avoids traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I I run it every day after school.

I used to ride it every day after school.

原句时态和动词使用不正确。句中有重复“I I”,并且在描述过去习惯时应使用过去时或“used to + 动词”。另外,动词“run”用法不当,骑自行车应使用“ride”。建议在描述过去的习惯时使用“used to”或过去式,如“I used to ride it every day”。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Because we, uh, you know, in China, not everyone have car and back is a convenience transport.

Because, you know, in China, not everyone has a car and bikes are a convenient means of transport.

原句存在主谓一致错误:主语“not everyone”要求动词第三人称单数“has”,不能用“have”。此外,“back”拼写错误,应为“bike(s)”,且名词单复数和冠词使用不当;“is a convenience transport”用法也不自然,应改为“bikes are a convenient means of transport”。建议注意主谓一致和名词单复数形式,并使用合适的表达。

Present tense issue

× And for example, I ride bike every day, uh, go to company.

For example, I ride a bike every day to go to work.

原句时态和用词不自然。日常习惯可以用一般现在时“I ride a bike every day”。同时“go to company”不是地道表达,应改为“go to work”或“go to the company”。另外,缺少冠词“a”在“ride a bike”。建议注意冠词使用和自然固定搭配(go to work)。

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