Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh), and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it every afternoon with my friends, and we often explored the neighborhood park together. This made after-school time really fun and helped me stay active.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, avoid hesitation and repetition, and provide a clear reason with specific details or comparison. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct simple grammar (e.g., 'cheaper than').

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are much cheaper than motorcycles and cars. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to work or the market, and they are also easier to park and maintain.

× Yes, I was a child. I had a bicycle. I used to ride it, uh, every afternoon with my friends, uh.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it every afternoon with my friends.

The original contains redundant and awkward sentence order: 'Yes, I was a child' is unnecessary and breaks fluency. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Combine related ideas to match natural English: place the time reference 'when I was a child' with 'I had a bicycle.' Also remove filler words 'uh' that do not belong in written corrected sentences. Suggestion: keep related information together and avoid unnecessary short sentences that disrupt flow.

× Yes uh, bikes are popular in my country because uh bikes, uh, price uh, it's cheap rather than uh uh, bice motorcycle.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are cheaper than motorcycles.

This sentence has multiple problems: incorrect article/pronoun usage and poor sentence structure (types 22 and 26). 'Bikes, price it's cheap' is ungrammatical. Use the plural subject 'bikes' with the plural pronoun 'they' and compare using the comparative adjective 'cheaper than' followed by the plural noun 'motorcycles.' Also correct the misspelling 'bice motorcycle' to 'motorcycles.' Remove filler 'uh.' Suggestion: form a clear comparative structure: 'X are cheaper than Y' and ensure subject-pronoun agreement and correct plural nouns.