Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I used to have a bike when I was in primary school, however after I grew up it gradually became became unnecessary so I sold it out.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Based on my observation, most people don't have a bike with them because that is not convenient and also unnecessary in our city.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答总体可以理解,但存在重复词("became became")、不自然用法("sold it out"),以及信息可以更连贯具体。建议:简化句子并直接回应,使用合适的动词短语(如"sold it"或"gave it away"),加一两条具体细节如骑行的记忆或原因,并用连接词保持流畅。例如可先陈述有无,再说明原因和一次具体回忆。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon, but as I grew older I hardly used it and eventually sold it because I preferred public transport.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰但略显笼统。建议提供更具体的理由或对比(如城市布局、公共交通发达、气候或安全问题),并使用更自然的短语(例如"not many people"、"not convenient for commuting")。用一两个连接词如"because"或"due to"来组织信息会更好。
Ví dụ: In my city, bikes aren't very popular. Because public transport is convenient and the roads are busy, most people prefer buses or scooters for commuting rather than cycling.
× I used to have a bike when I was in primary school, however after I grew up it gradually became became unnecessary so I sold it out.
✓ I used to have a bike when I was in primary school; however, after I grew up it gradually became unnecessary, so I sold it.
错误类型:过去时态问题。说明:句子中使用了过去时态“used to have”“grew up”“became”“sold”,时态总体可以,但存在用法和表达不准确的问题。具体问题有两点:1) “became became”是重复词,属于笔误,应删除重复;2) “sold it out”搭配不当,英语中通常说“sold it”而不是“sold it out”(“sell out”表示售罄或背弃),在此处使用一般过去时“sold it”最合适。建议:删除重复词,将“sold it out”改为“sold it”,并在连接句子时用分号或逗号加连词使句子更流畅。
× Based on my observation, most people don't have a bike with them because that is not convenient and also unnecessary in our city.
✓ Based on my observation, most people don't have a bike with them because it is not convenient and is unnecessary in our city.
错误类型:介词/代词使用不当和句子结构问题。说明:原句中“that is not convenient”中的指示代词“that”指代模糊,改为“it”更自然;另外“and also unnecessary”中重复使用连接词显得冗余,改为“and is unnecessary”使结构并列且语法一致。建议:用“it”指代前述情况,保持动词形式一致,去掉多余的副词“also”或放在合适位置。