Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course. I think bike are popular in my country and people in my country usually, umm, use bike for go to, uh, some place to enjoy, uh, their umm.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda tidak menjawab pertanyaan yang diajukan; Anda mengulangi pertanyaan pewawancara. Untuk memperbaiki: jawab langsung dengan kalimat topik yang jelas (mis. "Yes, I did" atau "No, I didn't"), lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat dukungan yang spesifik (mis. kapan, siapa yang membelikan, atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya). Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu dan batasi jawaban maksimal 4–5 kalimat. Berlatih menjawab penuh daripada mengulang pertanyaan.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I used it almost every day to ride around the neighbourhood with my friends, and it helped me become more independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda relevan tetapi tidak lancar dan mengandung pengulangan, filler (umm, uh), serta tata bahasa yang keliru. Untuk memperbaiki: mulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, perbaiki tata bahasa ("bikes are" bukan "bike are"), kurangi filler, dan tambahkan satu atau dua detail spesifik (mis. tujuan pemakaian—ke sekolah, ke pasar, atau untuk rekreasi; contoh frekuensi atau perbandingan dengan kendaraan lain). Gunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "for example" untuk koherensi. Batasi jawaban menjadi 3–4 kalimat singkat dan jelas.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are cheap and practical. For example, in small towns you often see families cycling to the market on weekends.
× I think bike are popular in my country and people in my country usually, umm, use bike for go to, uh, some place to enjoy, uh, their umm.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country, and people in my country usually use bikes to go to some places to relax.
Kesalahan jamak/tunggal: 'bike' harus dalam bentuk jamak 'bikes' karena berbicara tentang sepeda secara umum; kata kerja 'use' diikuti oleh objek jamak juga 'bikes'. Struktur 'use bike for go to' salah; setelah 'use' untuk menyatakan tujuan gunakan 'to' + infinitive ('to go'), jadi gunakan 'use bikes to go'. 'Some place' harus jamak 'some places' saat berbicara secara umum. Penyusunan kalimat juga diperbaiki untuk kelancaran dan tata bahasa yang benar.