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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country. Many people prefer motorcycle or cars for computing and there are few S bike lanes so I rarely see people sailing in my neighborhood.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan; Anda hanya mengulangi pertanyaan pewawancara. Untuk memperbaiki: langsung beri jawaban singkat (ya/tidak), tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik (mis. umur saat pertama kali, siapa yang memberi, kenangan singkat). Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu (for example, when, because). Batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 4–5 kalimat dan gunakan kosakata yang relevan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven — it was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my birthday. I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park and I remember feeling very proud when I could ride without help.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Kalimat Anda cukup langsung tetapi terdapat beberapa kesalahan kosakata dan struktur yang mengurangi kejelasan. Perbaiki kosakata yang salah (mis. 'computing' → 'commuting', 'S bike lanes' → 'bike lanes', 'sailing' → 'cycling') dan tambahkan alasan spesifik atau contoh untuk mendukung pendapat Anda. Gunakan satu atau dua kata penghubung (for example, because, therefore) untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Usahakan 3–4 kalimat maksimal.

Ví dụ: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorcycles or cars for commuting because the distances are long and public roads lack proper bike lanes. For example, in my neighborhood I rarely see anyone cycling to work, so cars remain the main mode of transport.

Ngữ pháp

'14:Incorrect use of quantifiers'

× 'Many people prefer motorcycle or cars for computing and there are few S bike lanes so I rarely see people sailing in my neighborhood.'

'Many people prefer motorcycles or cars for commuting and there are few bike lanes so I rarely see people cycling in my neighborhood.'

'Kata "motorcycle or cars" tidak konsisten dalam jumlah; gunakan bentuk jamak "motorcycles or cars" untuk menyamakan kedua pilihan. "Computing" adalah kata yang salah konteks; kata yang benar adalah "commuting" (pergi ke tempat kerja/sekolah). "S bike lanes" tampaknya salah ketik; seharusnya "bike lanes". Kata "sailing" digunakan untuk berlayar, bukan bersepeda; kata yang benar adalah "cycling". Saran: periksa kesesuaian kata (kata bentuk tunggal/jamak), gunakan kosakata yang sesuai konteks, dan periksa typo.'

'27:Subject-verb agreement errors'

× 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'

'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'

'Kalimat ini sudah benar secara grammatikal dan subjek "bikes" cocok dengan predikat "are popular". Tidak perlu perubahan.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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