Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give concise supporting details (who, why, how often). Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because', 'so', 'and'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle when I was about eight so I could ride to school on my own. I used it almost every day during term time, which gave me a lot of independence and exercise.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid saying personal habit as the only evidence; mention observable facts (e.g., bike lanes, commuting, weekend use). Use linking words (for example, 'because', 'for example', 'also') and correct tense and grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and leisure. For example, cities have built dedicated bike lanes and you can see many people cycling to work or riding in parks on weekends.

× I have.

✓ I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child). The student replied 'I have', which is present tense and uses a present perfect structure incorrectly. This is a pronoun/tense mismatch in context. Use 'I did' or 'Yes, I did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: answer past questions with past-tense auxiliaries like 'did'.

× I had a back when I was a child, my father bought me for a bike to go to school only by myself.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child; my father bought it for me so I could go to school by myself.

This sentence has multiple structural issues: wrong word choice ('back' instead of 'bike'), incorrect word order ('bought me for a bike'), incorrect pronoun ('me' vs 'it' for the bike), and an awkward purpose clause. Correct by using the correct noun, proper pronoun reference, and a clear purpose clause with 'so I could'. Suggestion: break long ideas into clauses, use correct nouns, and use 'so I could' to express purpose.

× I usually, uh, used it to go to uh, go to student, uh, go to uh, school.

✓ I usually used it to go to school.

The original is repetitive and contains filler words and wrong noun 'student' in place of 'school'. The verb 'used' is correct for past habitual action; keep 'usually used it to go to school.' Suggestion: remove fillers and repetition for clarity.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because I like to ride a bike when every time and many people like to ride a bike when they in in their free time to relax.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I like to ride a bike all the time, and many people like to ride bikes in their free time to relax.

Problems: 'every time' is the wrong expression for frequency (use 'all the time' or 'very often'), repetition and plurality errors ('ride a bike' vs 'ride bikes') and extra words ('when they in in'). Also the sentence is run-on and needs a conjunction. Suggestion: use 'all the time' or 'very often' for frequent actions, match plurality of 'bikes' with 'many people', and remove duplicated words.

× So I think they are popular.

✓ So I think they are popular.

This sentence is grammatically fine; 'they' correctly refers to 'bikes' (plural). No change needed. Explanation: pronoun reference and agreement are correct, so keep as is.