Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: แก้ประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคบอกตรงๆ ตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้นๆ และใช้คำเชื่อมเล็กน้อย เช่น 'and' หรือ 'so'. ควรแก้ตำแหน่งไวยากรณ์ของคำกริยา (ใช้อดีตกาล) และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'training wheels' แทน 'extension wheels'. ตัวอย่างการปรับปรุง: พูดประโยคไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค ให้ชัดเจนและไม่ซ้ำซ้อน ใช้โครงสร้าง: topic sentence + brief detail + reason/occasional memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a few small bikes, and some of them came with training wheels to help me learn. I enjoyed practicing in the park near my house, and after a while I could ride without them.

Gợi ý: ปรับความชัดเจนของเหตุผลและโครงสร้างประโยค ใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นชัดเจนตามด้วยเหตุผลสองข้อโดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' และ 'therefore' หลีกเลี่ยงคำเติมเสียง (uh) และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'they do not support' หรือ 'there aren't many bike lanes'. ให้รายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ปัญหาเรื่องความปลอดภัยหรือสภาพอากาศ และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4 ประโยค.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few dedicated bike lanes and cycling is often unsafe in traffic. Also, many people find public transport or motorbikes more convenient, so fewer people use bicycles for daily commuting.

× Yes I have when I was young I have like 3-3 views bike that have the extension wheels for a very kids and very young for practicing biking and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young. I had about three small bikes that had training wheels for very young children to practice riding.

The student mixed present and past tense; the event occurred in the past so past tense must be used. Use 'had' (past of 'have') for possession in the past. Use 'about three' instead of '3-3 views' and 'training wheels' instead of 'extension wheels'. Also simplify and split into two clear sentences for clarity. Suggestions: consistently use past tense for childhood experiences (I had, they were), use standard vocabulary (training wheels), and punctuate sentences. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I don't think so because of uh, in my country they are not support the uh, the bike lane so much.

✓ I don't think so because in my country they do not support bike lanes very much.

The original contains incorrect preposition 'because of' followed by 'in my country' and lacks auxiliary 'do' for negative present simple. Use 'because' before a clause, and use 'do not support' for negative with plural subject. Use plural 'bike lanes' and 'very much' for degree. Suggestions: use 'because' + clause, include auxiliary verbs for negatives in present simple, and match plural/singular nouns. Grammar problem type ID:11

× The convenience of biking is not enough, so no more people use the bikes code for transportation.

✓ Biking is not convenient enough, so fewer people use bikes for transportation.

Use present simple to describe general truth; 'is not enough' is awkward—use 'is not convenient enough.' 'No more people' is incorrect here; 'fewer people' is the correct comparative for countable nouns. Remove 'code' which is incorrect here. Suggestions: use 'fewer' with plural countable nouns, place adjectives before nouns, and remove extraneous words. Grammar problem type ID:6