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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I do have a bike when I was a child. I use it when I go from school and I also use it when I do visit friends from their house, so I was able to practice.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Living in a country where in bikes are very famous, it is very popular for many children. They were use it when they have to go from school or when they want to visit a friend.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (past tense and articles), make the answer more natural and concise, and add a clear topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details. Use past simple for past events, correct verb forms, and combine ideas with linking words like "and" or "so". Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to and from school every day, and I often used it to visit friends in the neighborhood, so I became quite confident cycling early on.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Make the statement direct and grammatical, use present simple for general facts, and include a brief reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas. Avoid awkward phrasing such as "where in bikes are very famous."

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children, because many families find them an easy and cheap way to travel short distances. For example, many students cycle to school or to a friend's house every day.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I do have a bike when I was a child.

I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past possessions.

Present tense issue

× I use it when I go from school and I also use it when I do visit friends from their house, so I was able to practice.

I used it to go to and from school, and I also used it to visit friends at their houses, so I was able to practice.

The sentence contains present tense verbs ('use', 'go') and an unnecessary emphatic 'do visit' while the context is past. Change verbs to simple past 'used' and 'used to visit'. Also replace 'go from school' with 'go to and from school' and 'from their house' with 'at their houses' for natural prepositions and plural agreement.

Sentence structure errors

× Living in a country where in bikes are very famous, it is very popular for many children.

In my country, bikes are very popular with many children.

The original has awkward structure and incorrect word order ('where in bikes are very famous' and 'it is very popular for many children'). Rephrase for clarity: 'In my country' sets context, 'bikes are very popular with many children' uses correct preposition 'with' and natural adjective placement.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× They were use it when they have to go from school or when they want to visit a friend.

They use it when they have to go to school or when they want to visit a friend.

The original mixes past passive 'were use' with present 'have' and 'want'. Decide present general truth: use simple present 'use'. Also correct preposition: 'go to school' not 'go from school'. If referring to past, use 'They used it when they had to go to school or wanted to visit a friend.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FamousWell known
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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