Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have, I often drive drive the back with my friends in park, play in the park.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, my country often have some free back in the street where you want to drive the bike. You may spend money to to drive the back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意時態一致、語法和發音清晰。你應該直接回答問題(如:Yes, I did.),然後用1-2句話補充具體細節。避免重複詞語,使用連接詞使句子更流暢,例如“and”或“so”。例如可以說明你騎車的頻率、和誰一起以及你為何喜歡。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike with friends in the local park when I was a child, and we usually spent a couple of hours there every weekend because it was fun and a good way to exercise.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答時注意詞彙準確(bike, bicycle, hire, rent, public bike scheme),並保持句子簡潔。先給出直接觀點(Yes, they are. / No, they aren't.),然後用1-2句具體原因或例子支持,例如提到公共共享單車、租借系統或街道設施。避免語法錯誤和重複。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many cities have public bike-sharing systems and dedicated bike lanes, so people often rent bikes for short trips or for commuting.
× Yes I have, I often drive drive the back with my friends in park, play in the park.
✓ Yes, I did. I often rode a bike with my friends in the park and played there.
句子中存在主谓一致和时态错误。第一句问的是过去是否有自行车,正确回答应使用过去时的助动词“did”而不是现在时“have”。原句“I often drive”使用现在时,而上下文为过去习惯,应使用过去时“rode/played”。此外有重复单词“drive drive”,名词用法也不当(应为“ride a bike”或“rode a bike”),以及缺少冠词“the park”。建议:1) 回答过去经历用过去时(did / rode / played)。2) 表达骑车用固定搭配“ride a bike”或过去式“rode a bike”。3) 公园前加定冠词“the”。4) 避免单词重复。 (简体中文)
× Yes, my country often have some free back in the street where you want to drive the bike. You may spend money to to drive the back.
✓ Yes, in my country there are often some free bikes on the streets where you can ride. You may also need to pay to rent a bike.
句子存在主谓一致、there be结构、名词使用和动词搭配错误。原句“my country often have”主语是单数“my country”,动词应为“has”或用“There are”。所谓“free back”应为“free bikes”(名词复数),并且位置表达应为“on the streets”。“drive the bike”搭配不当,英语中说“ride a bike”或“rent a bike”。第二句中“spend money to to drive the back”有重复“to”,并且用途表达应为“pay to rent”。建议:1) 主语为单数用单数动词或使用“There are”引出复数名词。2) 使用正确名词“bikes”并放在“on the streets”。3) 使用“ride a bike / rent a bike”而不是“drive”。4) 删除重复的“to”。 (简体中文)