Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have my bike when I was child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bike is very popular in our country because I saw many children riding bike or small bike and it was enjoying when I was see them and that's all.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently and give a brief additional detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + short phrase), then add one supporting detail. Keep it natural and within 2–3 sentences. For example, say where or when you got the bike or how you used it.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural, use plural and correct verbs, and provide a specific reason or example. Begin with a clear statement, then support it with one or two concise reasons using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid vague phrases like "that's all."
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short journeys. For example, I often see families riding small bikes in parks and people cycling to work in the mornings.
× Yes, I have my bike when I was child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' for possession in the past. Also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child.'
× I think bike is very popular in our country because I saw many children riding bike or small bike and it was enjoying when I was see them and that's all.
✓ I think bicycles are very popular in our country because I saw many children riding bikes or small bikes, and it was enjoyable to see them.
Multiple issues that match the listed problem types: singular/plural nouns should be plural when speaking generally ('bike' -> 'bicycles' or 'bikes') and countable nouns need articles when singular ('small bike' -> 'small bikes' or 'a small bike'). Also 'it was enjoying when I was see them' is ungrammatical; 'enjoying' is incorrect here and verb phrase should be 'it was enjoyable to see them' or 'I enjoyed seeing them'. Additionally 'I was see' mixes tenses and forms. Suggested corrected sentence: 'I think bicycles are very popular in our country because I saw many children riding bikes or small bikes, and it was enjoyable to see them.'