Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ более естественным и структурированным: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения с конкретными деталями (например, возраст, кто учил, где вы катались). Избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов («uh», «umm») и используйте простые связки, такие как "when" или "after" для последовательности событий.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I started learning to ride a bike when I was seven. My older brother taught me in the park near our house, and after about a year I felt confident enough to ride on the road.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и добавьте конкретные причины или примеры, чтобы поддержать мнение. Используйте связки (for example, because, especially) и избегайте общих фраз и пауз. Один-два уточняющих предложения будет достаточно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially among young people. For example, many students cycle to university because it is cheap and convenient, and in cities you can often see lots of cyclists during rush hour.

× I have, uh, practice, uh, when I was, uh, seven years old.

✓ I started practicing when I was seven years old.

The original uses present perfect 'have practice' incorrectly with a past time 'when I was seven years old'. Use simple past 'started' for completed actions in the past; 'practice' as a noun is wrong here, use the verb 'practicing'. Suggestion: use simple past for finished past events and verb+ing after 'start'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I start practice a bike, umm, after one year, after one year when I was.

✓ I started practicing riding a bike after one year.

The speaker used present 'start' and the noun 'practice' incorrectly and an incomplete clause 'when I was'. Use simple past 'started' and the verb+ing form 'practicing' after 'start'. Also use 'riding a bike' for clarity. Remove the incomplete 'when I was' or complete it with an age. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, we can see many people who bike ride the bike.

✓ Yes, we can see many people riding bikes.

The original repeats and misorders words: 'who bike ride the bike' is ungrammatical. Use the present participle 'riding' to describe people, and plural 'bikes' to match 'many people'. This fixes pronoun/word order and makes the sentence natural. Grammar problem type ID:12

× There are a lot of young people who have bike.

✓ There are a lot of young people who have bikes.

The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' because it refers to many young people each possessing at least one. Use plural to agree with 'a lot of young people'. Grammar problem type ID:1