Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 시제, 불필요한 반복을 고치세요. 현재형과 과거형을 혼용하지 않고 한 문장에 핵심 답변(있었음/없었음)을 먼저 말한 뒤 이유를 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 또한 'of of', 'I was I was' 같은 중복을 제거하고 관용적인 표현(avoid letting me ride / thought it was dangerous)을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents didn't let me ride a bike when I was young because they thought it was too dangerous for me.

Gợi ý: 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 복수·단수 형태와 시제, 관사 사용을 주의하고, 중복되는 표현을 줄이세요. 연결어(for example, so, therefore)를 사용해 이유와 예시를 논리적으로 제시하고, 구체적 예시(공공 자전거 이름이나 장소)를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. The government provides public bicycles, so many people use them for short trips, for example to parks or museums.

× Yes I have, but my parents of of try to avoid using bicycle because they thought it was too risky for me.

✓ Yes, I did, but my parents often tried to avoid me using a bicycle because they thought it was too risky for me.

Error type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 6 (Present tense issue). The student used 'have' (present) with a past context, so it should be 'did'. 'Of of' is a typographical error and should be 'often' or another adverb — here corrected to 'often'. 'Try' should be past 'tried' to match 'thought'. 'Using bicycle' needs an object article and verb structure; 'me using a bicycle' is clearer. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past situations, fix typos, and include articles where needed.

× I was I was too young to control the bike.

✓ I was too young to control the bike.

Error type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors). The sentence contains unnecessary repetition 'I was I was'. Remove the duplicate. Suggestion: Read sentences aloud to catch repeated words and ensure concise structure.

× Ah yes, I think so. Umm, our government provide people with public bicycle, so many of us can use them whenever we go somewhere.

✓ Ah yes, I think so. Umm, our government provides people with public bicycles, so many of us can use them whenever we go somewhere.

Error type IDs: 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 1 (Singular and plural issue). 'Government' (singular) requires 'provides'. 'Public bicycle' should be plural 'public bicycles' because 'many of us' implies multiple bikes. Suggestion: Match singular subjects with singular verbs and use plural nouns when referring to countable items in general.

× Umm when you go to the bike, when you go to the park or a national museums.

✓ Umm, when you go on a bike, or when you go to the park or a national museum.

Error type IDs: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 1 (Singular and plural issue). The phrase 'go to the bike' is incorrect; use 'go on a bike' or 'ride a bike'. 'A national museums' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to singular 'a national museum' or plural without 'a'. Suggestion: Use appropriate prepositions ('on' for using a bike) and ensure articles agree with singular/plural nouns.