Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have one when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Bikes are very popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 语法和时态有错误,且回答过短。应该用过去时,并先直接回答然后用一到两句补充细节(例如谁给你的、你多大时用、你是否经常骑)。注意不要超过五句,使用连词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但比较简短。可以在主句后加入具体例子或原因来丰富内容,例如说明哪些人群常骑车、在哪些场合流行、或近年来是否更流行。使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example” 提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, they are. For example, many students and commuters use bicycles in cities because they are cheap and convenient, and recent bike-sharing schemes have made cycling even more common.
× Yes, I have one when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.
错误类型:现在时使用不当。原句中使用了现在时态“have”,但句子有时间状语“when I was a child”,表示过去的情况,应该使用一般过去时。因此应将“have”改为过去式“had”。建议:遇到表示过去时间的词或短语(如 when I was… / last year / in 2005 等)时,一般使用一般过去时。
× Bikes are very popular in my country.
✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.
这句语法正确,无需修改。它使用一般现在时陈述普遍事实,结构和时态均恰当。