Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes I did. I have a bright yellow bike. Just so lovely.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, in my country, uh, many people will ride a bike to uh, go to work or go home or go to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、完整并使用适当时态。首先用一句主题句直接回应(过去时),然后用1–2句具体细节支持,避免填充词如“uh”。可补充骑车的经历、为什么喜欢或与谁一起骑等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a bright yellow bike that I loved. I used to ride it to the park with my friends every weekend, and I liked it because it was light and easy to handle.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答需更流畅并使用更自然的连接词与更具体的细节。先给出直接观点,再用原因或例子支持,尽量避免重复短语和过多犹豫语。可以说明在哪些城市或场合更常见,以及原因(方便、环保、节省)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. In many cities people cycle to work or school because it's cheap and often faster than driving in heavy traffic. For example, in my hometown many commuters use shared bikes to get around during rush hour.
× Uh, yes I did. I have a bright yellow bike. Just so lovely.
✓ Uh, yes I did. I had a bright yellow bike. It was so lovely.
原句时态不一致。考官问的是过去(Did you have... when you were a child?),学生第一句“Yes I did”用过去时正确,但接着用现在时“I have a bright yellow bike.”描述儿时拥有的物品应使用过去时,改为“I had...”。此外“Just so lovely.”不是完整句子,改为完整的“It was so lovely.” 更自然。建议:在叙述过去经历时,保持过去时态,并使用完整句子。
× Yes, uh, in my country, uh, many people will ride a bike to uh, go to work or go home or go to school.
✓ Yes, in my country many people ride bikes to go to work, go home, or go to school.
原句使用“will”表达一般事实不自然。描述习惯或普遍情况应使用一般现在时(many people ride)。另外“ride a bike”在泛指时更常用复数“ride bikes”。并去掉多余填充词“uh”。建议:描述常态或习惯时用一般现在时,用复数或不可数形式表达泛指,并保持句子简洁。