Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more coherent, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and contradictory statements (for example, saying you didn’t have a bike but later saying you rode one as a child).

Ví dụ: I didn’t own a bike when I was young, so my family usually drove me everywhere. However, I sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bicycle to ride home from school in the evenings, and I enjoyed these short rides because they helped me unwind after classes.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer, more specific response with better organization and accurate grammar. Begin with a direct opinion, then add one or two concrete reasons or examples linked with connectors (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Avoid fragment sentences and generalisations without support.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many families own at least one or two bicycles. For instance, people often use bikes for short trips to the market or to visit neighbours, since they are economical and convenient in crowded areas.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No change needed; sentence correctly uses simple past tense to describe a past state. Keep as is.

× I used to go by a car.

✓ I used to go by car.

English uses 'by car' without an article when describing mode of transport. Remove 'a' before 'car'. 'Used to' correctly indicates a habitual past action.

× When I want to visit my family house, I ride a bicycle.

✓ When I want to visit my family's house, I ride a bicycle.

Add possessive form 'family's' to show the house belongs to the family. The present tense 'want' and 'ride' are acceptable for habitual actions; no tense change is needed.

× When I was a child, I used to ride a bicycle in the evening.

✓ When I was a child, I used to ride a bicycle in the evening.

This sentence is correct: 'used to' properly expresses a habitual past action and 'in the evening' is a correct time phrase.

× When I come from school, I enjoyed riding a bicycle.

✓ When I came home from school, I enjoyed riding a bicycle.

Tense inconsistency: 'come' is present while 'enjoyed' is past. For a past habitual event, use past tense 'came'. Also 'from school' often pairs with 'came home' to indicate arriving home; use 'came home from school'.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country because each house has their own bike.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country because each house has its own bike.

Pronoun agreement: 'house' is singular so use possessive 'its' rather than 'their'. 'Its' shows possession for a singular noun.

× One or two people from family.

✓ One or two people from each family do.

Original is a fragment lacking a verb and clear reference. Make it a complete clause: 'One or two people from each family do' or 'One or two people in each family do.' This clarifies meaning and supplies a verb.

× They used to ride bike in all the houses.

✓ They used to ride bikes in all the households.

Use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'In all the houses' is awkward; 'in all the households' or 'in every household' is more natural. 'Used to' correctly indicates habitual past, but if speaking about current habit use 'ride bikes'.

× They enjoy riding in the bikes.

✓ They enjoy riding bikes.

Do not use 'in' with 'ride' for bicycles; say 'ride bikes'. Also no article is needed when speaking generally ('ride bikes' not 'ride the bikes').

× Also. Even if they want to go near, they will go by a bike.

✓ Also, even if they want to go somewhere nearby, they will go by bike.

Fix punctuation: combine fragments into one sentence. 'Go near' is unidiomatic; use 'go somewhere nearby' or 'go to nearby places'. Use 'by bike' (no article) to describe mode of transport.