Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I have got a bike from my father as my birthday gift when I was 8 years old and I really love it because it's pink. Umm. I think a bike can help me relax more because when I was a little child I really love doing outside activity.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well yes, M bike is a transportation way, so people tend to ride bike to work or to study in campus and young people tend to ride bikes because it is more environmental health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 问题回答要更自然、时态一致,并减少冗余。回答开头可以直接回应,然后用一到两句具体细节支持(如描述骑车的感受或回忆),避免口头语“Umm”和语法错误。注意动词时态(过去经历用过去式),并使用连接词使语流更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes. My father gave me a pink bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I loved it. Riding it let me explore the neighborhood and feel free, especially on sunny afternoons. Because of that, cycling became my favorite way to relax when I was a child.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确、用词恰当并补充具体例子。避免模糊或错误短语(如“M bike”),使用清晰的连接词并给出具体原因或场景(例如城市通勤、校园短途)。注意语法(主谓一致)和词组搭配(‘environmentally friendly’而不是‘environmental health’)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use bicycles for short commutes to work or classes, especially in cities with bike lanes. Young people often prefer cycling because it’s cheap, convenient and environmentally friendly.
× I have got a bike from my father as my birthday gift when I was 8 years old and I really love it because it's pink.
✓ I got a bike from my father as a birthday gift when I was 8 years old, and I really loved it because it was pink.
此句描述过去发生的动作(8岁时收到自行车),应使用一般过去时而不是现在完成时。原句用“I have got”不合时态,应改为“I got”。同时后半句描述过去的感受与特征也应使用过去时,故将“love”改为“loved”,“it's pink”改为“it was pink”。建议:讲述过去事件时使用一般过去时,保持时态一致。
× Umm. I think a bike can help me relax more because when I was a little child I really love doing outside activity.
✓ I think a bike can help me relax more because when I was a little child I really loved doing outdoor activities.
句中包含现在时态观点“ I think ”可以保留,但随后提到过去习惯应使用一般过去时,将“love”改为“loved”。另外,“outside activity”搭配不自然,应为“outdoor activities”(复数更常用)。建议:描述过去习惯或状态时用过去时,并使用地道短语“outdoor activities”。
× Well yes, M bike is a transportation way, so people tend to ride bike to work or to study in campus and young people tend to ride bikes because it is more environmental health.
✓ Well, yes. Bikes are a means of transportation, so people tend to ride bikes to work or to study on campus, and young people tend to ride bikes because it is better for the environment and for health.
原句存在代词和名词单复数问题(应使用复数“bikes”)。“M bike”似为笔误应删除或改为“Bikes”。短语“transportation way”不地道,应为“a means of transportation”。“ride bike”应为“ride bikes”。“study in campus”应为“study on campus”。最后“more environmental health”表达错误,应改为“better for the environment and for health”(对环境和健康更有益)。建议:注意名词单复数一致,使用习惯搭配并把含义分开表达以清晰传达。