Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have, and my parents bought it when I was nine years old and I started to learn how to ride back at that time.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think back six bikes are popular in Taiwan. Our government serves public bikes for people can can ride, and also people in Taiwan usually learn how to ride a bike in elementary school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子時態和語法需更準確、回答要更自然簡潔。建議用過去式描述過往經驗,避免冗長或重複詞彙;可以先一句直接回答(主題句),再用一到兩句具體細節支持(如誰買的、幾歲開始、學會得快不快、騎車的回憶)。注意連接詞使用以保持流暢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was nine, and I learned to ride it that summer. I practiced in our neighborhood park and quickly got comfortable riding on my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子語法和詞序需要改進,並避免口誤和多餘字詞。回答應先直接表明觀點,然後用具體原因或例子支持。可以提到公共單車系統、學校教育和日常通勤情況,並用連接詞(for example, because)使邏輯更清楚。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Taiwan. For example, many cities have public bike-sharing systems, and children usually learn to ride in elementary school, so cycling is common for short trips and commuting.
× Yes, I have, and my parents bought it when I was nine years old and I started to learn how to ride back at that time.
✓ Yes, I did. My parents bought it when I was nine years old, and I started to learn how to ride it then.
错误类型:冠词/助动词使用错误。原句中与过去事件搭配的助动词应使用过去式 'did' 而不是现在式 'have';另外短语 'back at that time' 冗长且不自然,改为 'then' 更简洁。建议:在回答过去经历的问句(Did you...?) 时,用助动词 'did' 或直接用一般过去时句式;用简单时间副词(then, at that time)表达过去时间。
× Yes, I think back six bikes are popular in Taiwan.
✓ Yes, I think bikes have been popular in Taiwan for some time.
错误类型:现在时表达/词序和表达不自然。原句 'back six' 无意义且词序混乱,且想表达持续的现在情况应使用现在完成时或一般现在时。建议:用 'bikes are popular' 或更自然的 'have been popular for some time' 来表达目前的普及状态。
× Our government serves public bikes for people can can ride,
✓ Our government provides public bikes for people to ride,
错误类型:介词/结构使用错误。原句 'serves public bikes for people can can ride' 语法混乱:动词 'serve' 用法不当,重复 'can',且不定式结构 'for people to ride' 更合适。建议:用 'provide' 或 'offer' 表示政府提供服务,后接不定式 'for people to ride' 表目的。
× and also people in Taiwan usually learn how to ride a bike in elementary school.
✓ also, people in Taiwan usually learn to ride a bike in elementary school.
错误类型:句子结构/冗余表达。原句 'learn how to ride a bike' 可以简化为 'learn to ride a bike',更自然;在连接词后加逗号使句子更清晰。建议:简化动词短语,保持句子连贯。