Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and I loved it because it made me feel independent.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes is really popular in my country. I usually see somebody is riding a bike to get their come to get their company or school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答总体较好,直接回应了问题并给出原因,语气自然。但可以更精简并加入一至两句具体细节(例如骑多远、和谁一起或特别的回忆)以增加内容丰富性。同时注意最多不超过5句,保持连贯可用连接词如“so”或“because”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, which was about a fifteen-minute ride, so I felt very independent. I also enjoyed cycling with my neighbor on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有想法但存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。注意主谓一致("bikes are"),句子结构需要更准确并清晰说明谁骑车以及为什么受欢迎。可以用连接词(for example, because)并给出具体场景或数据来支持观点。保持句子简洁,最多五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride them to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. You can see commuters cycling on dedicated lanes during rush hour.
× Yes, bikes is really popular in my country.
✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.
问题类型:Subject-verb agreement(主谓一致)。句子主语是复数名词“bikes”,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”而不是单数“is”。建议:识别主语的单复数,根据主语选择动词形式。
× I usually see somebody is riding a bike to get their come to get their company or school.
✓ I usually see somebody riding a bike to get to their company or school.
问题类型:Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)和冗余/词序问题。原句包含重复短语“to get their come to get their”,且在“see somebody is riding”中更自然的结构是“see somebody riding”。此外,“get their company”应为“get to their company”表示“到公司”。建议:去掉重复部分,使用正确的动词不定式结构“get to”,以及在“see somebody riding”中使用动词-ing形式以表达正在发生的动作。