Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had one when I was a child. My father bought it for me so I could ride to school and I used it almost every day. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, which I loved.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Many people in my country own bikes. They use them not only to commute to work or school, but also for layer rides. And many people prefer cycling because it's environmentally friendly and helps them to keep fit.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 总体回答自然且信息完整,但可更直接用一两句主题句开头,然后用1–2句具体细节支撑。注意避免重复(例如“when I was a child”已在主题句中出现可减少重复),并可用简单连词使表达更连贯。可以加一个简短的回顾或情感评价,提升表现力。
Ví dụ: Yes — I had a small red bicycle as a child. My father bought it so I could ride to school, and I used it almost every day; it even had a little basket that I loved because I could carry my books and snacks.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答观点清晰但可改进用词与连贯性。注意拼写(“layer rides”应为“leisure rides”或“short leisure trips”),合并短句用连接词使结构更紧凑,并加入具体例子或比较来丰富内容。可以举一两个具体场景或统计以提高说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular. Many people use them to commute to work or school, and others ride for leisure on weekends; cycling is popular because it’s eco-friendly and a good way to stay fit — for example, city parks are often full of cyclists on sunny afternoons.
× They use them not only to commute to work or school, but also for layer rides.
✓ They use them not only to commute to work or school, but also for leisure rides.
原句中“layer”是拼写错误,应为“leisure”(休闲)。这不是介词用法问题,而是词汇拼写或用词不当,但在给定问题类型列表中最接近的是“11: Incorrect use of prepositions”。建议:注意单词拼写,写作前检查常见单词;可朗读句子以发现不熟悉或不合逻辑的词。
× And many people prefer cycling because it's environmentally friendly and helps them to keep fit.
✓ Many people prefer cycling because it's environmentally friendly and helps them keep fit.
句首不需要用连词“And”来衔接独立回答,去掉“And”更自然流畅。这属于句子结构和连词使用问题,列表中最接近的是“6: Present tense issue”。建议:在口语或书写中,回答直接开始主句更清晰;如需连接上下文,确保连接词有必要且放在合适位置。