Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, use correct tense and simpler sentences, avoid filler words, and give one clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Correct grammar (past tense) and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the story coherent. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I got my first bike when I was ten years old. It is a very memorable moment because I found it hard to balance at first, so I fell several times while learning. After practicing with my parents for a few weeks, I finally learned to ride confidently and enjoyed cycling around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give specific reasons and contrast with linking words (however, on the other hand). Correct noun/adjective forms (e.g., 'bike-friendly'). Avoid fillers and repetitions. Give one or two concrete examples to support your points.

Ví dụ: It depends: bikes are popular for sport and leisure but not widely used for everyday transport. For example, many people cycle in parks or on weekends for exercise, however the cities are not very bike-friendly because there are few bike lanes and safety measures, so most people prefer cars or public transport.

× I get my first bike when I was 10 years old.

✓ I got my first bike when I was 10 years old.

The speaker is referring to a past event, so the past simple tense 'got' should be used instead of the present simple 'get'. Use past tense for actions completed in the past (Suggestion: use 'got' for single past events).

× Is is a a memorable memories when I first time a challenge to learn how to, uh, use the bike.

✓ It is a memorable experience when I first tried to learn how to use the bike.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect structure. 'Memories' (plural) does not match 'a' and 'is a a' is redundant. 'First time a challenge' is ungrammatical. Correct structure: 'It is a memorable experience when I first tried to learn how to use the bike.' Use 'tried' (past simple) for the past attempt and 'experience' for a single memorable event. (Suggestion: remove repeated words, use a clear subject 'It' and proper noun 'experience'.)

× I've I can't balance my body when ride.

✓ I couldn't balance my body when I rode it.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'I've', present 'can't', and lacks the object after 'ride'. The event is past, so use past simple 'couldn't' and 'rode'. Include the object 'it' or 'the bike'. (Suggestion: choose past tense consistently and include proper object: 'I couldn't balance my body when I rode it.')

× Riding it is a difficult challenge.

✓ Riding it was a difficult challenge.

Context refers to a past situation, so 'was' (past simple) fits better than present 'is'. The sentence structure is acceptable but tense must match surrounding sentences. (Suggestion: use past tense for past experiences.)

× And this answer is depends on, on sport or the transportation.

✓ This depends on whether it is for sport or transportation.

'Is depends on' is incorrect verb structure; use 'depends on'. Also include 'whether' to introduce alternatives and use 'sport' and 'transportation' as nouns properly. Remove extra 'on'. (Suggestion: use 'This depends on whether...' to present two possibilities.)

× In sports, I will say yes, because a lot of uh, uh, people will riding it, uh, when their leisure time,

✓ In sports, I would say yes, because a lot of people ride it in their leisure time,

'People will riding' is incorrect: use present simple 'ride' for habitual actions or 'will ride' for future; the gerund 'riding' is wrong here. Also 'I will say' is odd in this context; 'I would say' or 'I would say yes' is more natural when giving an opinion. Use 'in their leisure time' rather than 'when their leisure time'. (Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions: 'people ride it in their leisure time'.)

× but for the transportation is not that popular because our country is not their friendlies friendly.

✓ but as a means of transportation it is not that popular because our country is not very bike-friendly.

The phrase 'for the transportation' is awkward; 'as a means of transportation' is better. 'is not their friendlies friendly' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use adjective 'bike-friendly' and qualifier 'very' or 'particularly' for degree. Ensure subject 'it' and verb 'is' are present. (Suggestion: rephrase to 'as a means of transportation it is not that popular because our country is not very bike-friendly.')