Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two concise supporting details (who bought it, what it was like, a short memory). Use correct tense and simple, accurate vocabulary. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid filler phrases and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a gift and it was a small red bicycle with a 110cc-style look—though it was actually a child’s bike. I remember riding it to the park every weekend and feeling very proud.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then provide one or two specific supporting details or an example. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and correct plural/singular forms. Avoid repeating phrases like "yeah" and "it's an amazing question."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short commutes. For example, many people use motorbikes to get to work or the market, and both men and women ride them daily because public transport can be crowded.

× Yes, I had an A bike when I am child, when I am child it the bike has very it is an 110 CCS and it is bought by my father and it's probably the gift.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was 110 cc and it was bought by my father; it was probably a gift.

Multiple past tense errors: 'am child' should be 'was a child' (past tense and article), 'it the bike has very it is an 110 CCS' is ungrammatical and should use past simple 'was' and correct noun phrase '110 cc'. 'It is bought by my father' should be past passive 'was bought by my father' because the action happened in the past. Suggestion: use past simple consistently for past events and simplify the description into clear clauses. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I think so it is an I don't remember correctly, but I think so it's a minute yeah, I haven't buy when I'm sorry.

✓ I think so, but I don't remember correctly. I'm not sure; I can't remember when, sorry.

This sentence mixes present simple, present perfect, and incorrect verb forms. 'I don't remember correctly' is fine, but 'I haven't buy' is incorrect; the present perfect requires past participle 'bought' and likely isn't appropriate—use 'I can't remember when' to express inability to recall. Also remove filler words like 'it's a minute'. Suggestion: break into short clear sentences and use correct verb forms ('bought' for past participle) or modal phrases ('can't remember'). (Grammar problem type IDs: 5 and 9)

× Yeah, I think so. It's an amazing question to to ask that.

✓ Yes, I think so. That's an interesting question to ask.

Awkward phrasing and article use: 'It's an amazing question to to ask that' repeats 'to' and uses 'that' unnecessarily. Use 'That's an interesting question to ask' or 'That's an interesting question.' Keep present tense but correct collocation. Suggestion: avoid repetition and unnecessary pronouns. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Yeah, bike has because in our country daily commute is is done by a bus or a bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular because in our country daily commute is often done by bus or bike.

Subject-verb and article errors: 'bike has' is incorrect; use plural 'bikes are'. Remove redundant 'a' before 'bus' and 'bike' when speaking generally. Also 'is is' duplication should be 'is' and better phrased 'is often done by bus or bike'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking about general popularity and simplify passive construction. (Grammar problem type ID: 27)

× So yeah, lots of men and also women using the bikes for their daily purposes.

✓ So yes, many men and women use bikes for their daily needs.

Incorrect verb form 'using' lacks auxiliary or correct tense; in present simple state use 'use'. 'Lots of' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural with count nouns. 'The bikes' is unnecessary—use 'bikes' generally. 'Daily purposes' is unnatural; use 'daily needs' or 'daily commuting'. Suggestion: use present simple 'use' for habitual actions and choose natural collocations. (Grammar problem type IDs: 27 and 12)