Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, absolutely. Because, uh, when I was a child I used to learn to how to ride a bike and at that time I had had my own time and I used my back to go to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I think in my country many people like to ride bikes and usually on the road you can see the bags everywhere, not only their own bags, but also the shared bikes. So I think it is really popular because because it it is true here.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且句子更清晰,避免口头语(如 uh)和语法错误。开头用一句主题句直接回答,然后用一到两句具体细节支撑(例如什么时候、和谁学、骑车的频率或用途)。注意时态和短语搭配(learn to ride a bike, go to school by bike)。控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about seven, and I often used it to go to school every day. I usually rode with my older brother, and it gave me a lot of freedom to get around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需更具体并改善词汇使用与连贯性。避免重复(比如 “because because”),用连接词组织观点(for example, moreover)。提供具体证据(比如共享单车数量、使用场景或城市与乡村差异)。句子应简洁明了,不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in the city, and you can often see dozens parked near subway stations. Moreover, cycling is common among students and commuters because it is cheap and convenient.
× Because, uh, when I was a child I used to learn to how to ride a bike and at that time I had had my own time and I used my back to go to school.
✓ When I was a child I used to learn how to ride a bike, and at that time I had my own bike and I used it to go to school.
问题类型(8):动词 + -ing 形式 / 结构错误。句子中“used to learn to how to ride”中不需要“to”在“how”前,正确结构是 “learn how to do sth” 或 “learn to do sth”。另外 “had had my own time” 用法不自然且错误,应为 “had my own bike”(表示拥有一辆自行车)。最后“used my back to go to school” 是不合适的表达,应使用代词“it”指代自行车:"used it to go to school"。建议:使用固定搭配“learn how to + 动词原形”或“learn to + 动词原形”;表示过去习惯用“used to + 动词原形”;用适当的代词代替重复名词。
× Yes, because I think in my country many people like to ride bikes and usually on the road you can see the bags everywhere, not only their own bags, but also the shared bikes.
✓ Yes. I think many people in my country like to ride bikes, and you can usually see bikes everywhere on the road, not only their own bikes but also shared bikes.
问题类型(6):现在时态/用词错误。原句中“you can see the bags everywhere” 使用了“bags(包)”而非“bikes(自行车)”,这明显是词汇错误导致时态或语义混淆。同时语序有些不自然,且“not only their own bags, but also the shared bikes”中名词不一致。建议将名词统一为“bikes”,并调整副词位置为“you can usually see”。
× So I think it is really popular because because it it is true here.
✓ So I think biking is really popular here because that's true.
问题类型(26):句子结构错误。原句有重复词“because because it it”且结构冗余,不通顺。将句子简化为“biking is really popular here because that's true” 更简洁明确。建议:避免重复词,合并短语并用指示代词(that)代替重复内容,使句子更自然。