Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb agreement and avoid repetition. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I didn't have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed my older brother's. When we visited my father in Bulacan, we loved racing and timing each other between two landmarks, which was great fun and helped me improve my riding.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then expand with clear, specific examples. Remove fillers like “umm” and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, additionally) to organize reasons and finish your thought; avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles have become quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many people now cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic, and delivery riders often use bikes for short-distance orders, especially in crowded urban areas.

× I didn't have a bike of my own when I was a child but my older brother have 1 and I used to borrow it a lot whenever we visit our dad who lives in Bulacan and also we we love to race and we would time ourselves from one point to another depending on how.

✓ I didn't have a bike of my own when I was a child, but my older brother had one and I used to borrow it a lot whenever we visited our dad who lives in Bulacan. We also loved to race and would time ourselves from one point to another depending on the route.

The sentence mixes past and present tense forms. 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'didn't have' and 'used to'; 'visit' should be past 'visited'; 'we love' should be past 'we loved'. Consistent past tense is required when describing habitual actions in childhood. Suggestions: keep verbs describing past events in past tense (had, visited, loved), break the long run-on sentence into shorter sentences, and replace '1' with the word 'one'.

× Yes, I would say that bicycles are popular in the Philippines nowadays people use it for umm going to work.

✓ Yes, I would say that bicycles are popular in the Philippines. Nowadays people use them for going to work.

The plural subject 'bicycles' requires the plural pronoun 'them', not 'it'. Also the original is a run-on; it needs a sentence break after 'the Philippines'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent and separate independent clauses into sentences or use correct conjunctions.

× They use it to deliver deliver foods or services to other people instead of using motorcycles and nowadays, since the.

✓ They use them to deliver food or provide services to other people instead of using motorcycles.

Problems: repeated word 'deliver deliver'; 'foods' is usually uncountable as 'food'; pronoun should be 'them' for plural 'bicycles'; the clause ends abruptly 'since the.' which is incomplete and must be removed or completed. Suggestion: remove repetition, use uncountable 'food' or 'meals', use 'them' to agree with 'bicycles', and avoid unfinished clauses.