Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are popular in my in in my country because our country advocates green lifestyle.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法不准确,需要使用过去时;回答应更直接并补充一两句具体细节以显得更自然。例如说明什么时候有、经常去哪儿骑或与谁一起骑。避免冗长重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it to my friend's house after school. It was my main way of getting around the neighborhood and I loved racing with my brother on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答总体直接,但有口误(重复词)并且可以提供更具体的支持细节。使用连接词来扩展观点,比如给出例子、统计或比较,展示更丰富的词汇。保持句子简洁,最多五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Bicycles are especially popular in cities because many people prefer them for short commutes. For example, there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs in several major cities, which makes cycling convenient and eco-friendly.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
问题类型:现在时使用错误(应使用过去时)。说明:句子中的时间状语是“when I was a child”(我小时候),表示过去的时间,因此动词不能用现在时“have”,而应使用过去时“had”。建议:遇到明确的过去时间点或时间状语(如 when I was ... / last year / in 2010 等),把谓语动词改为过去时。
× Yes, bikes are popular in my in in my country because our country advocates green lifestyle.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because our country advocates a green lifestyle.
问题类型:介词/冠词重复和冠词使用错误。说明:原句中出现了“in my in in my country”的重复短语,属于词语重复错误,应删掉多余部分;另外“advocates green lifestyle”缺少不定冠词,习惯用法是“advocate a green lifestyle”(提倡一种环保的生活方式)。建议:去掉重复的“in my”,并在“green lifestyle”前加不定冠词“a”。