Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, when I was three years old child, my parents bought me a small bike and told me how to ride it. Then when I was a primary school student say buy me, they bought me a bigger one.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Bikes are very popular in my country nowadays. People likes to go cycling, uh, after work to strengthen their body to exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法准确并结构清晰。开头直接回应问题并用一到两句具体描述(什么时候、有怎样的自行车、谁教的)。避免多余词汇和语法错误,例如不要说 “three years old child” 或多余的短语。可以使用连接词简单连贯地展开原因或感受。
Ví dụ: Yes. My parents bought me a small bike when I was three and taught me how to ride it. Later, when I was in primary school they bought me a larger one, which I used to cycle to my friends' houses.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更地道并注意主谓一致与流畅性。先给出直接意见,然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持(谁、什么时候、为什么骑车)。使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example” 增强逻辑性,避免口头语如 “uh”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bicycles have become very popular recently because many people cycle after work to stay fit. For example, in my city groups of colleagues often ride together in the evening.
× Yeah, when I was three years old child, my parents bought me a small bike and told me how to ride it.
✓ Yeah, when I was three years old, my parents bought me a small bike and taught me how to ride it.
问题类型:过去时和表达方式错误。解释:原句中 “three years old child” 冗余且不符合英语习惯,常说 “when I was three years old” 或 “when I was a three-year-old child”。另外, 表达 “告诉我如何骑车” 用 tell me how to ride it 不如用 teach me how to ride it 更自然,因教会某项技能时应使用 teach。建议:使用正确的过去时表达并用 teach 表示教会技能。
× Then when I was a primary school student say buy me, they bought me a bigger one.
✓ Then when I was in primary school, they bought me a bigger one.
问题类型:句子结构错误。解释:原句 “say buy me” 是无意义杂词,破坏句子结构。描述年龄阶段更自然的表达是 “when I was in primary school” 或 “when I was a primary school student”。保持动词时态为过去时,主句用 they bought me 保持一致。建议:删除无关词,使用常见短语 “in primary school”。
× People likes to go cycling, uh, after work to strengthen their body to exercise.
✓ People like to go cycling after work to exercise and strengthen their bodies.
问题类型:主谓一致及表达顺序问题。解释:主语 People 为复数,谓语动词应为 like 而不是 likes。原句中的 “to strengthen their body to exercise” 结构混乱,应该改为并列不定式或先说明目的 “to exercise and strengthen their bodies”。同时,body 应为复数 bodies,与复数主语一致。建议:将谓语改为 like,并调整不定式顺序,body 改为 bodies。