Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and word choice, and avoid unrelated or incorrect words. Use one or two specific supporting details linked logically. For example, correct verb forms (treaded → rode), avoid wrong words (pasta times → pastimes), and keep to 2–4 sentences. Also add a linking word when giving a reason or detail (for example, because, so, then).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My neighbors gave me a pink Hello Kitty bike, and I rode it in our backyard every day. Because I loved riding, it became my favorite pastime after I finished my homework.

Gợi ý: Make your response more structured and clear: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, because, so, and). Avoid awkward or vague phrases (e.g., "community thought of") and incorrect word forms ("ride in their bicycles" → "ride their bicycles"). Keep it to 2–4 sentences and include a concrete example or brief comparison if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Bikes are especially popular with children because many neighborhoods have wide, quiet roads, so kids can ride safely. For instance, when I was growing up, lots of families encouraged outdoor play and children often rode together after school.

× My neighbors gave me a pink Hello Kitty bike and we moved into the neighborhood and I treaded it immensely as I used to ride it in the backyard every day.

✓ My neighbors gave me a pink Hello Kitty bike when we moved into the neighborhood, and I treasured it immensely because I used to ride it in the backyard every day.

The main verb 'treaded' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'treasure' (past: 'treasured'). 'Tread' means to step on and its past is 'trod' or 'tread' depending on sense, so 'treaded' is wrong. Also the sentence needed clearer conjunctions and a time link: 'when we moved into the neighborhood' clarifies timing and 'because' explains reason. Use the past tense 'treasured' to match 'gave' and 'used to ride'. Suggestion: replace 'treaded' with 'treasured' and restructure to 'when we moved... and I treasured it... because I used to ride it...'.

× It became one of my favorite pasta times whenever I had finished my homework and been done with other chores.

✓ It became one of my favorite pastimes whenever I had finished my homework and finished my other chores.

The word 'pasta' is a wrong lexical choice; the correct noun is 'pastime'. Also 'been done with other chores' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'finished my other chores' to match tense and subject. 'Whenever I had finished' (past perfect) is acceptable to indicate sequence; keep it and use 'finished' for parallel structure. Suggestion: replace 'pasta' with 'pastime' and change 'been done with other chores' to 'finished my other chores'.

× Yes, I would say so, especially amongst children in the country where I live there are many broad roads, empty most of the time, and many of the children back then would ride in their bicycles just as a hobby or as a community thought of.

✓ Yes, I would say so. In the area where I live, there are many wide roads that are empty most of the time, and many children used to ride bicycles there as a hobby or as a community activity.

The original sentence is a run-on with mixed clauses and awkward phrasing ('amongst children in the country where I live there are...'). Break into two sentences and reorder for clarity. 'Broad roads' is acceptable but 'wide roads' is more natural. 'Many of the children back then would ride in their bicycles' is ungrammatical: 'ride their bicycles' is correct (no 'in'), and 'back then' with 'would' suggests past habit; 'used to ride' is clearer. 'As a community thought of' is incorrect; use 'as a community activity' or 'as a social activity'. Suggestion: split sentences, use 'In the area where I live' and 'used to ride bicycles as a hobby or community activity'.

× many of the children back then would ride in their bicycles just as a hobby or as a community thought of.

✓ many children used to ride their bicycles there as a hobby or as a community activity.

The preposition 'in' before 'their bicycles' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'ride bicycles' or 'ride their bicycles'. Also 'thought of' is not an appropriate preposition phrase here. Use 'there' to locate where they rode, and 'as' to indicate purpose. Suggestion: remove 'in' and replace 'thought of' with 'activity'.