Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I always rode my bike to school when I was in middle school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I think so, because we have many shared bikes on the road which can be used by our cell phones and we can route it to anywhere.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接、相关,但可以更自然、更完整。可在主题句后加入一两个具体细节(例如骑车的频率、距离或感受),并使用连接词使句子更流畅(例如“usually”、“because”)。注意避免重复时态信息(“when I was in middle school”即可)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I usually rode my bike to school every day when I was in middle school because it was only about ten minutes from my home, and I enjoyed the fresh air and freedom it gave me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有思路,但表达不够准确且有语法和用词问题。建议先给出直接回答,然后用具体例子和连接词扩展,例如说明共享单车的普及原因、使用方式和影响。注意语法(用“access them via our phones”代替“used by our cell phones”),并避免模糊表述如“route it to anywhere”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. For example, there are many dockless shared bikes that people can unlock and pay for through smartphone apps, which makes cycling a convenient option for short trips around the city.
× we have many shared bikes on the road which can be used by our cell phones and we can route it to anywhere.
✓ We have many shared bikes on the road that can be unlocked with our cell phones, and we can ride them to anywhere.
句子中存在动名词/非谓语形式使用以及代词指代不明的问题:原句用 which 引导定语并接 “can be used by our cell phones” 表达不自然,手机并不能“使用”单车,而是用手机解锁或租借单车;此外 “route it to anywhere” 用词不当,应该是骑车到某处,用 ride them to anywhere。建议用 that 或 which 作定语从句,并使用恰当动词短语(unlock with/ride)及正确的代词(them 指代 bikes)。这属于“8: Verb + -ing form” 范畴(非谓语/动名词相关错误)并涉及用词与指代改正。
× we can route it to anywhere.
✓ we can ride them to anywhere.
原句使用了不正确的介词短语和动词搭配:route ... to 在此上下文不合适,英语中表示前往某地应使用 go/ride to 或 ride them to。并且 anywhere 前不需要介词 to(可说 ride them anywhere 或 ride them to any place)。建议改为 “ride them anywhere” 或 “ride them to anywhere” 中更自然的是 “ride them anywhere”。这属于“11: Incorrect use of prepositions”。
× we have many shared bikes on the road which can be used by our cell phones
✓ we have many shared bikes on the road that can be unlocked with our cell phones
原句中 pronouns/被动结构和工具表达不准确:使用 “used by our cell phones” 会让人误解为手机在“使用”自行车,实义上应表示人用手机解锁/租借自行车,工具用介词应为 with(unlocked with our cell phones)。同时 which 引导的定语从句可以改为 that。建议把被动结构改为更准确的表达,如 “unlocked with our cell phones” 或 “rented through our phones”。这属于“12: Incorrect use of pronouns”(代词及指代不当)。