Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tense consistency (use past tense when talking about childhood) and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was at school. I rode it to school every day, and in the evenings I often cycled with my friends to a nearby park. This helped me stay active and spend time with classmates.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use clearer sentence structure, correct grammar (e.g. subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words (however, because, for example) to organise ideas.

Ví dụ: I think bicycles are less popular now than they used to be. For example, many people now prefer motorbikes or cars for longer commutes; however, bicycles remain common in small towns because students and shopkeepers often use them to travel short distances.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was in school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was in school.

No change needed; sentence properly uses past tense to describe a past situation.

× I used to use it for going, going to school and also in the evening.

✓ I used to use it to go to school and also ride it in the evening.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base verb, not the -ing form. Repeating 'going' is redundant. Use 'to go' after 'used to' and 'ride' to describe activities with the bike.

× I use it to use it to ride a bicycle with my friends.

✓ I used to ride my bicycle with my friends.

The original has repetition ('use it to use it to') and wrong present tense 'use' for a past habit. Change to past habit 'used to' and remove redundant words for clear structure.

× Uh, nowadays it's not like popular as much as in past, but in past this bike bikes are popular, uh, because every students use bice bicycles to, to commute from one place to another like in small cities.

✓ Nowadays bikes are not as popular as they were in the past, but in the past bikes were popular because students used bicycles to commute from one place to another in small cities.

Multiple issues: tense inconsistency and incorrect comparative structure. Use present tense 'are' for current state and past tense 'were' for past state. 'Not as popular as' is the correct comparative form. Remove duplicated words and correct noun number agreement ('students used bicycles').

× And also you use it for travelling to school as well.

✓ People also used them for travelling to school.

The original uses 'you' generically and mixes present with past. For describing past common practice, use 'people' or 'students' and plural pronoun 'them' to match 'bikes'. Use past tense 'used' to match earlier context.