Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases like “I used to” three times and make the answer more concise and varied. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a brief example. Use linking words such as “and” or “because” once to connect ideas. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., enjoy, love, cherish) and keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it with my cousins because we would race each other around the park on weekends, which was exciting and helped me feel confident on two wheels.

Gợi ý: Correct basic vocabulary and grammar errors and answer directly. Begin with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases such as “rarely indispensable” or “racial role.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to avoid traffic. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work and students riding to school.

× I used to enjoy riding it with my cousins because I used to find it really enjoyable and rewarding.

✓ I used to enjoy riding it with my cousins because I found it really enjoyable and rewarding.

The phrase 'used to' already indicates a habitual past action; combining it repeatedly with 'used to find' is redundant. The second verb should be in simple past (found) rather than repeating 'used to'. Use simple past to describe a past feeling after establishing habitual past with 'used to'. Suggestion: after 'used to' for the action, use simple past for resulting states (found).

× Yes, I think bakes are rarely indispensable and have good reputation in our country because they are playing a racial role in our daily lives.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are indispensable and have a good reputation in our country because they play a crucial role in our daily lives.

Multiple issues: 'bakes' is a spelling error (should be 'bikes'); 'rarely indispensable' is contradictory and incorrect—use 'indispensable' or 'not indispensable'; missing article before 'good reputation' (should be 'a good reputation'); 'are playing' present continuous is unnecessary for a general statement—use simple present 'play'; 'racial role' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice—'crucial' or 'important' fits. Suggestions: correct spelling, use appropriate adjective ('indispensable'), include article 'a', use simple present for general facts, and choose accurate vocabulary ('crucial').