Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verbs and simple past tense (e.g., "I had a bike"). Avoid unclear words ("life", "erode") and reduce redundancy. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding details (for example, "and" or "so").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my brother, and we would cycle around our neighborhood every afternoon. Those rides were a big part of my childhood and helped me stay active.

Gợi ý: Make a complete, coherent opinion sentence and support it with specific reasons. Start with a clear direct answer ("No, I don't think they are very popular"). Then give one or two concise reasons with correct grammar and linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid fragmented clauses and incorrect infinitive forms ("let you to run" → "let you ride safely").

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the streets are crowded and traffic congestion makes cycling unsafe. As a result, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel.

× I did have a life when I was a child.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student likely meant to say 'bike' not 'life'; this is a word choice/content error rather than grammar, but the sentence structure is otherwise fine. Replace 'life' with 'a bike' to match the question. Suggestion: read the question carefully and use the key noun from it.

× I erode it with my brother, so I enjoy my childhood with riding a bike.

✓ I rode it with my brother, so I enjoyed my childhood riding a bike.

'Erode' is the present tense verb meaning 'to wear away' and is incorrect here. The past tense of 'ride' is 'rode'; use 'rode' to describe a past habitual action. Also, 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed' to match the past time frame. 'With riding a bike' is awkward; use 'riding a bike' as a gerund phrase or 'ride bikes' — here 'riding a bike' after 'enjoyed' is natural. Suggestion: use correct past tense verbs for past events and choose the correct verb ('ride' -> 'rode').

× I erode it with my brother, so I enjoy my childhood with riding a bike.

✓ I rode bikes with my brother, so I enjoyed my childhood.

A clearer and more natural structure is to say 'I rode bikes with my brother' and then 'I enjoyed my childhood.' Avoid the redundant 'with riding a bike.' Suggestion: keep sentences concise and make verb tenses consistent.

× I don't think so, because.

✓ I don't think so, because bikes are not very practical in my city.

This fragment ends with 'because.' It needs a clause explaining why. Provide a complete reason clause after 'because.' Suggestion: always follow 'because' with a full explanation clause.

× It's really crowded and traffic congestion doesn't let you to run like so I think it's.

✓ It's really crowded, and traffic congestion doesn't allow you to ride freely, so I don't think they're very popular.

Several issues: 'let you to run' is incorrect—'let' or 'allow' should be followed by the base verb without 'to' (let you ride / allow you to ride). 'Run' is the wrong verb for riding a bike; use 'ride' or 'move.' 'Like so I think it's' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with a clear conclusion 'so I don't think they're very popular.' Suggestion: use 'allow you to' + base verb or 'let you' + base verb, choose appropriate verbs ('ride'), and connect clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× traffic congestion doesn't let you to run like so I think it's.

✓ traffic congestion doesn't allow you to ride freely, so I don't think bikes are popular.

Use 'doesn't allow' (does + base verb) for third-person singular subject 'traffic congestion.' Remove 'to' after 'let' when using 'let'; with 'allow' use 'to' + verb. Also correct pronoun/reference: 'I think it's' is vague; specify 'bikes are popular.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb structure is correct for third-person singular and that verbs following 'let' or 'allow' use proper patterns.